Sara Kendrick Poet Alliteration

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Just for fun....
Scantle...breaking into pieces

Cleaning Sandcastle

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                                        Soft sighing of tall Georgia pines
                                       Simmering stew bubbles on stove
                                       Sounds_scents envelope combine
                                      Sabotaged sage while she so strove
                                        To complete cleaning sandcastle
                                   Built in sand, shuttle there now scantle


In honor of John Freeman's
Alliteration Poems Please

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Jack Horne October 10, 2011 at 10:18 AM LOL, I find alliteration's almost impossible to read out loud

Nette Onclaud September 12, 2011 at 11:52 PM sara dear, loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Robert A. Dufresne September 12, 2011 at 9:48 PM I love esp the first line. Makes me feel there. Love tall pines. Congratulations to you Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 12, 2011 at 6:56 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!---Lori

John Freeman September 12, 2011 at 2:01 PM Sara, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Cleaning Sandcastle" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses

Kim Merryman September 12, 2011 at 12:55 PM Congrats on your win, Sara! Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 8:45 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Sara. Love, Carol

David Williams September 12, 2011 at 4:15 AM Sara congrats on your win..David

Joyce Johnson September 12, 2011 at 1:50 AM Congratulations Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 12, 2011 at 1:27 AM Congrats Sara on sweet success with this great Alliteration poetry my friend...luv...

Caryl Ramsdale September 12, 2011 at 12:40 AM A 5th place congratulations Sara for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR

Gwendolen Song September 8, 2011 at 11:44 PM Shhhhh...I am trying to hear the soft sighing of your tall Georgian pines....so peaceful an image and sound. Great write...best luck in this super competitive contest. Gwendolen

Doris Culverhouse September 8, 2011 at 8:48 AM at least you have someone to blame it on.

Kash Poet September 8, 2011 at 7:52 AM Very nice Alliteration here Sara.Enjoyed reading it.Best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2011 at 12:23 AM Gotta love all those S's, Sara!! I just don't know if I will be able to do this particular contest. I am sure you will do well in it!

Caryl Ramsdale September 7, 2011 at 7:19 PM I love this line..."Soft sighing of tall Georgia pines" Good luck in the "Alliteration Poems Please" poetry contest as John judges my friend. Cr

Russell Sivey September 7, 2011 at 9:29 AM Great work! It a wonderful poem Sara!! Russell Sivey September 7, 2011 at 9:30 AM Good luck in the contest!!