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Just for fun....
Scantle...breaking into pieces

Cleaning Sandcastle

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                                        Soft sighing of tall Georgia pines
                                       Simmering stew bubbles on stove
                                       Sounds_scents envelope combine
                                      Sabotaged sage while she so strove
                                        To complete cleaning sandcastle
                                   Built in sand, shuttle there now scantle


In honor of John Freeman's
Alliteration Poems Please

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2011

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Jack Horne Date: 10/10/2011 10:18:00 AM LOL, I find alliteration's almost impossible to read out loud Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/12/2011 11:52:00 PM sara dear, loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 9/12/2011 9:48:00 PM I love esp the first line. Makes me feel there. Love tall pines. Congratulations to you Sara Login to Reply

Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 9/12/2011 6:56:00 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!---Lori Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 9/12/2011 2:01:00 PM Sara, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Cleaning Sandcastle" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 9/12/2011 12:55:00 PM Congrats on your win, Sara! Kim Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/12/2011 8:45:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Sara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 9/12/2011 4:15:00 AM Sara congrats on your win..David Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 9/12/2011 1:50:00 AM Congratulations Sara Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/12/2011 1:27:00 AM Congrats Sara on sweet success with this great Alliteration poetry my friend...luv... Login to Reply

Caryl Ramsdale Date: 9/12/2011 12:40:00 AM A 5th place congratulations Sara for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 9/8/2011 11:44:00 PM Shhhhh...I am trying to hear the soft sighing of your tall Georgian pines....so peaceful an image and sound. Great write...best luck in this super competitive contest. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/8/2011 8:48:00 AM at least you have someone to blame it on. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 9/8/2011 7:52:00 AM Very nice Alliteration here Sara.Enjoyed reading it.Best wishes. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/8/2011 12:23:00 AM Gotta love all those S's, Sara!! I just don't know if I will be able to do this particular contest. I am sure you will do well in it! Login to Reply

Caryl Ramsdale Date: 9/7/2011 7:19:00 PM I love this line..."Soft sighing of tall Georgia pines" Good luck in the "Alliteration Poems Please" poetry contest as John judges my friend. Cr Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 9/7/2011 9:29:00 AM Great work! It a wonderful poem Sara!! Login to Reply Russell Sivey Date: 9/7/2011 9:30:00 AM Good luck in the contest!!