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Classy Chassis Metaphor of Love

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I dream of you coming close to me making my motor accelerate, you see, it fuels the fire that lingers. Using your sexy sensual fingers, you slide your key to unlock my sweet door, opening knocking you of your feet. Captivated by my classy beauty and now obsolete, you slip in, slump into my leather seat warming me up with your cheeks. You find me physically ravishing, savoring my steering wheel and gear-stick as you gently caress me lovingly. In utter temptation you thrust the key into my ignition, depressing with your left foot on my clutch moving my gear-stick out of gear before starting, pressing firmly on the brake and clutch pedals to allure me to start and purr. Before you back out, you can't help, but grab my mirror to see how Foxy, you look behind my wheel. 11/9/2019 Poetry Contest: Metaphor Of Love Sponsored by: Bobby May

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Date: 11/14/2019 4:30:00 PM
Congratulation on your win & on your car picture. Both are wonderful..........
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Date: 11/13/2019 6:31:00 AM
Well penned, Eve. A delightful read. Congrats on your top read.
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Date: 11/13/2019 4:55:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place, Eve :) - You really used your imagination .... love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2019 7:11:00 PM
great write...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/12/2019 7:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win for this sensual metaphor, Eve, nicely penned. Hugs, john
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Date: 11/12/2019 7:00:00 PM
Wow Eve great win! Congrats!;)
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Date: 11/12/2019 6:37:00 PM
Congratulation on your Win! Eve this once caught my attention for sure, excellent
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Date: 11/10/2019 7:56:00 PM
ooh la la ,Eve. a very sexy ride this was. So creative.
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Date: 11/10/2019 2:01:00 AM
A car lover for sure...You wrote this really nice...hot wheels in the picture looks a bit stern...
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Date: 11/9/2019 10:01:00 PM
G'day Eve … often wondered what a car would say if it could talk. You have put me in the picture now - thank you Eve - Lindsay
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Date: 11/9/2019 10:58:00 AM
This is very clever... Great use of metaphor..
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Date: 11/9/2019 8:07:00 AM
Perfect example of personification...you put passion in motion Eve
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