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Classical Elements - 5 - Metal

rough metal ore a sword traded for a pen wise decision a poet to find autumn night , losing his leafs warrior within

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Date: 10/12/2009 3:18:00 AM
"A sword traded for a pen"! Wish more would do that, Marco! Very well done choka. Thank you for your comments. Gert
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Date: 9/28/2009 4:51:00 PM
excellent imagery! Light & Love
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Date: 9/28/2009 9:54:00 AM
Very nice choka. Loved the choice of words and the imagery they evoke. Loved the correlation with poetry. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 9/28/2009 9:40:00 AM
Nice choka Marco, I enjoyed your element series...Raul
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Date: 9/28/2009 6:33:00 AM
Pretty good poem. Pls re-entry: leaves. This is a brilliant choka, penned description. All the best.
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Date: 9/28/2009 3:47:00 AM
Love this one. Keep writing. Sara
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