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Class of Ordinary People

One in a shade with meat and a long knife old girl with a load of hair like a witch thug on a walk on yet a day to strife area of men of no cost in one pitch some lone, some even with a fine wife air so loud as on it the rich ditch big is the lane of the ride of life the many with no car can take a hitch no rest cos a coin can come and go not much, not zero, life isn’t a foe but a few get so weak to take a hoe work and walk, busy is this beehive the need to eat and what to wear connive just to keep up with the run and survive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/7/2021 6:44:00 PM
I love the rhyming....it kept me focused not to miss anything. Thank you.
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Date: 5/19/2016 9:43:00 AM
Very visual read Funom, i enjoyed this one, well done, warm regards, Laura.
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/20/2016 5:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura
Date: 5/16/2016 4:49:00 PM
life is a bitch that drags you around, no dollars no pennys no shillins no pounds, struggle we must if the rich man does frown, no use for the master, not much...
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/20/2016 5:09:00 AM
Thank you so much DOn Johnson
Date: 5/16/2016 2:07:00 PM
This is the first difference in society. The difference of food. Beautifully done. A 7. Loved always, bl
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/20/2016 5:08:00 AM
you are so so right Devnath
Date: 5/16/2016 1:08:00 PM
Hello Funom!! This is a really neat Sonnet here. Great Work!! I always like the directness and poignancy of your writes. You create telling images from your writes and always bring the reader for the ride with the richness and simplicity of your thoughts!! A "7"!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/20/2016 5:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Gary Bateman

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