Kim Van Breda Poet Free verse

Clandestine

CLANDESTINE

Clandestine…
nice and clean
her intent
candle glow..
all for show
his beguile
mesmerized
hypnotized
enticed 
lured

Clandestine…
anodyne
 arena
underground
concealed
furtively
she bares
her
soul
lured

Clandestine…
surreptitious
squeaky clean
secretively
seduced
conceded 
surrendered
and then..

DO
NOT
DISTURB
















© Kim van Breda—2 July 2015

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Viv Wigley July 5, 2015 at 1:36 PM Nice, flowing verse with a cracking build up, and the door clicks shut on the last lines better than Barbara Cartland could have done it (no comparison here- yours is much hotter) Viv x

Eileen Manassian July 5, 2015 at 8:39 AM Sizzling hot, my dear Kim. ;) I wouldn't dare disturb this clandestine tryst. Good luck in the contest. It's all very...beguiling. Kim Van Breda July 5, 2015 at 9:00 AM Thanks Eileen.. glad to see you active on the Soup again. I come and go.. too many distractions in life. Hope you are well. Contest... there is a contest with this theme? x~x