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City Streets

city streets scoured clean by windstorm... silent leaf blowers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/10/2011 3:44:00 PM
Good Carrie! OXOX Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/5/2011 5:07:00 PM
Very nice work here Carrie-should do excellent in Cyndi's contest :) I wish I had my car...The dealership still hasn't called and they have until Feb. 2 to call before I can even bug them :) LMAD did send us the $3900 though so that was nice. I will post pics. when I get it :)
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Date: 12/5/2011 12:44:00 PM
Very creative ..Good luck if for a contest..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 12/4/2011 5:08:00 PM
Fantastic write Carrie! I flows so well together and tells us, the reader, just what you want to convey! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 12/4/2011 3:51:00 PM
Excellent modern haiku, Carrie!
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Date: 12/4/2011 3:22:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Carrie. For some reason I always think of "Nightmare on Elm Street," but this is uplifting and delightful. Love, Carolyn
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