City Starlings

Waiting for the light to change
(A busy urban street),
I noticed quite a gathering
Not far from my two feet.

Upon a sewer grate I saw
Some starlings pecking ‘round
Although I didn’t even 
See a crumb upon the ground.

Their beaks dipped down, oblivious
To passersby or wheels,
Intent on filling up on what,
To them, comprises meals.

A couple flew away, replaced
By new ones in a flash,
Not plentiful as pigeons but
On city streets, as brash.

*the original title of this poem was "grackles on a grate,"
but when i googled to confirm that the birds i saw were,
indeed, grackles, i discovered they were starlings. 
poetic license only goes so far...
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Wolf Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 12:35 PM
Star is to starling as duck is to duckling, as pigeon is to ----No, let's not go there! LOL. Thanks, Ilene. Enjoyed. Smiles, Gershon
Mcleod Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 12:05 PM
LOL. I've done my fare share of Grackles on a Grate mistakes and had to change them Ilene. Love the flow of this and the line that says they were pecking without crumbs. LOL Story of my life. LOL Trevor
Hall Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 10:15 PM
Ah, FINALLY, a kindred soul. I am not completely averse to prose, but I get so tired of seeing "poem" after "poem" that is nothing more than just "train-of-thought" prose. Now poems, real, rhyming poems take thought, time, effort, and so much more. That is what I mostly do, and now I see that you do, too. Brava! Bravissima!
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 2:52 PM
I have never heard of grackles but starlings are common here but more in the countryside than in our city:- a wonderful observation as ever Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 2:47 PM
This was fun once again Ilene. We have Grackles down here in Texas but I don't think we have starlings.
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January 9, 2020 at 2:22 PM
A fine rhyme my friend. Flowed beautifully. Have a great day.
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