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City Starlings

Waiting for the light to change (A busy urban street), I noticed quite a gathering Not far from my two feet. Upon a sewer grate I saw Some starlings pecking ‘round Although I didn’t even See a crumb upon the ground. Their beaks dipped down, oblivious To passersby or wheels, Intent on filling up on what, To them, comprises meals. A couple flew away, replaced By new ones in a flash, Not plentiful as pigeons but On city streets, as brash. *the original title of this poem was "grackles on a grate," but when i googled to confirm that the birds i saw were, indeed, grackles, i discovered they were starlings. poetic license only goes so far...

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Date: 1/10/2020 12:35:00 PM
Star is to starling as duck is to duckling, as pigeon is to ----No, let's not go there! LOL. Thanks, Ilene. Enjoyed. Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 1/10/2020 12:05:00 PM
LOL. I've done my fare share of Grackles on a Grate mistakes and had to change them Ilene. Love the flow of this and the line that says they were pecking without crumbs. LOL Story of my life. LOL Trevor
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Date: 1/9/2020 10:15:00 PM
Ah, FINALLY, a kindred soul. I am not completely averse to prose, but I get so tired of seeing "poem" after "poem" that is nothing more than just "train-of-thought" prose. Now poems, real, rhyming poems take thought, time, effort, and so much more. That is what I mostly do, and now I see that you do, too. Brava! Bravissima!
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Date: 1/9/2020 2:52:00 PM
I have never heard of grackles but starlings are common here but more in the countryside than in our city:- a wonderful observation as ever Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2020 2:47:00 PM
This was fun once again Ilene. We have Grackles down here in Texas but I don't think we have starlings.
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Date: 1/9/2020 2:22:00 PM
A fine rhyme my friend. Flowed beautifully. Have a great day.
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