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Citrus Evening

Mango horizons, Grapefruit sun sinks in the sea: Apricot sunset.

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Mitch White

Date: 3/30/2010 5:41:00 AM

Well done Raul- closing in on brilliants

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/30/2010 5:25:00 AM

AMAZING Raul. Good morning. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/29/2010 11:36:00 PM

I love this Haiku-mesmerizing.. and the original description.. lovely..Charma

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/29/2010 7:08:00 PM

Sweet, memories you bring back with this Haiku, Raul!!Thanks for sharing it today....And thanks for your sponsored contest that allows us to use our immaginations...always welcomed..Peace, love, Audrey

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/29/2010 2:08:00 PM

This poem makes my mouth water....fruits of nature that light up the sky! Lovely piece! I can see a painting of these warm colors! Carrie

James Foulk

Date: 3/29/2010 1:47:00 PM

i could taste the fruit, and see the see, I liked the way you used the last line, Apricot sunset, a very beautiful write.

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 3/29/2010 12:50:00 PM

mmm mangos and apricots and grape fruits are healthy! nice haiku, great title

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/29/2010 12:42:00 PM

A yummy delight Raul .. lovely visual too.. your flair for words is unique ..luv.. Linda-Marie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/29/2010 12:17:00 PM

wonderful haiku, you are the king of haikus.