Citrus Evening

Mango horizons,
Grapefruit sun sinks in the sea:
Apricot sunset.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 30, 2010 at 5:41 AM
Well done Raul- closing in on brilliants
Brown Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 5:25 AM
AMAZING Raul. Good morning. Love, Carol
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March 29, 2010 at 11:36 PM
I love this Haiku-mesmerizing.. and the original description.. lovely..Charma
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March 29, 2010 at 7:08 PM
Sweet, memories you bring back with this Haiku, Raul!!Thanks for sharing it today....And thanks for your sponsored contest that allows us to use our immaginations...always welcomed..Peace, love, Audrey
Richards Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 2:08 PM
This poem makes my mouth water....fruits of nature that light up the sky! Lovely piece! I can see a painting of these warm colors! Carrie
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March 29, 2010 at 1:47 PM
i could taste the fruit, and see the see, I liked the way you used the last line, Apricot sunset, a very beautiful write.
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March 29, 2010 at 12:50 PM
mmm mangos and apricots and grape fruits are healthy! nice haiku, great title
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March 29, 2010 at 12:42 PM
A yummy delight Raul .. lovely visual too.. your flair for words is unique ..luv.. Linda-Marie
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March 29, 2010 at 12:17 PM
wonderful haiku, you are the king of haikus.
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