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Circus

CIRCUS?

It wasn’t a sparkling circus, 
or even a good kind of show;
It was in the hot dusty countryside, 
and lacked entertainment, or any 
kind of glow, mothers with their 
children,  dads with furrowed brow

The first act was a pop singer, oh 
how I wished he’d go, next came a 
flaming fire-eater, who  also swallowed 
swords, drawing children from their playing, 
with gasps and mighty OH’s! 

Then came a pair aged fifty-five, who
argued about life, and fell and slapped
about the stage, a warring man and wife

But the sand and flies, and micro-chair
made it all too much; I felt I’d wasted 
money, on this “circus”, called as such

So me, my wife and strapping son, in to
the night then gone

And thus we tell the dreary tale, of the 
circus that never shone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/12/2015 12:07:00 PM
What a fabulous tale, thank you for shared I enjoyed the read......A.M.
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Date: 6/8/2015 12:27:00 AM
Not a dreary tale, but a dreary Circus. I assume that you didn't ask for a refund, Peter. Regards, Viv
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Date: 6/6/2015 9:59:00 AM
These kind of family memories, though terrible at the time, make for great stories later! I enjoyed the read...I judged my Florida Nature contest a while back, but some health problems kept me in bed for awhile. When I recovered, my priority was spending time with my boys. I had to cut back my time on Soup. I will post the winners soon...sorry for the delay.
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