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Circumstances

We meet we talked you captured my heart Our minds our souls out of control Connections and reflections, we understood Our circumstances would not move on My torn soul in limbo time, love not to shine My circumstances my voice screaming silence Fear of change, fear repercussions, fear hurting others Loveless life caught in my own trap feeling crap I wrote this for all those trapped in loveless partnerships. then meeting there soulmate and doing nothing about it. I know so many caught up in this way passing through life. numbness and loveless life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/2/2018 1:54:00 PM
- So true and sad, Niall - Very well written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/1/2018 5:14:00 PM
well scribed with poignant tones, niall.. huggs
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Date: 4/30/2018 8:09:00 AM
A real shame Niall , it happened sometimes because of religion and parents choose a partner for their children, but it's not right. Tom.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/30/2018 3:50:00 PM
Hi Tom, thanks for comment:) like the song from Elvis ' caught in a trap::)))~~Niall
Date: 4/29/2018 5:23:00 PM
Really sad it is I think, when those who should be together, aren't, and those who shouldn't be, are, Niall. Expressed well. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2018 3:33:00 PM
oh so true Artsie:-( hugs jan xx
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/30/2018 3:47:00 PM
hi Artsieladie, thank you for comment :) sad but true for so many::)))Hugs~~~Niall
Date: 4/29/2018 4:20:00 PM
Brilliantly penned Niall, I think many can relate or know those in this situation:-( hugs jan xx
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/30/2018 3:43:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you for comment my friend::))))Hugs~~~Niall

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