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Poem as depicted here. ___________________________________________________________ CIRCUMLOCUTION was inspired by the poem, Him & Her Intersection, by Brian Bilston. In the 2015 Great British Write Off, he won the poetry prize for this poem disguised in a Venn diagram. My interpretation of the intersection poem scans differently to his as the intersected part is to be read in a loop, as suggested by the title. The Venn diagram poem is an interesting intersecting visual poem written inside a two-circle Venn diagram. It could be written on any subject where a contrasting viewpoint is key to a successful intersection poem. The idea is for the two outer sections (the opposing views) to be read independently taking the intersection into account, for example, xxxxxxxx X / X xxxxxx (the lines don’t have to be of an equal length.) This intersected piece ‘X’ should flow in a logical statement from top to bottom—I aimed for imagistic prose.

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Date: 7/26/2021 8:47:00 PM
Suzette, this poem is a virtuoso! I love the experimentation with Venn diagraming, and it works very effectively here. I feel an emotional push-pull tension between the "HE" and "SHE" that animates the poem. Very original! Please keep writing.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 7/26/2021 8:55:00 PM
Thank you for the encouraging words, Thomas.

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