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Circle of Candles

In her circle of candles As she kneels on the floor The words she recites Opens a door This avenue of the unknown As she summons a dark soul For a serpent is rising In demonic extol As it appears through the black In it's ogre dance It circles around it's summoner In her hypnotic trance She marvels at her powers Once her eyes have cleared To bring this from the darkness Her powers she never feared For the reasons of her actions Only time will tell Does she have a hidden agenda To cast our world to hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/18/2009 7:56:00 AM
thankxxx for your kudos on my Halfway poem which I entered in the Time Warp contest.. just written yesterday... u should have entered your Circle of Candles poem for this contest.. it is just what they asked for ... a supernatural event story through poetry... this poem is intense... back in the day I have dabbled in just such projects... life is to be wholly experienced... that is how we learn life's lessons... and I have!
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Date: 9/28/2009 10:51:00 AM
Edge of seat is where I sat while reading this. You scared me with this one. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2009 12:42:00 PM
Eerie and someone to fear.....!! Sounds like she has evil intentions!! Perfect for Halloween that is coming soon! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/27/2009 12:24:00 PM
Glad this is fantasy. Very inviting to read. Good rhyme. Keep writing. Sara
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