Circle.(Cross-Tanka)
no sunlight through
stars
dreams
escaped,misty
sparkling
have darkness
sight far
night meeting
thoughtful rebirth
passing
minutes,coming
circle
*
Cross-tanka can
be read in all
ways:up to
down,backwards,to
the left,right,in
steps up,down,in
diagonal.You should
just to stop where
you wish to make
sense of mini haiku
(without 5-7-5
rules)
1.no dreams have
night passing
minutes
coming,circle.
2.circle coming
minutes
passing,night
have dreams,
no sunlight through
misty stars.
3.no
sunlight,escaped,
sight far,
rebirth circle.
There are about
hundred or more
variations.
Copyright © Andrey Fisht | Year Posted 2010
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