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Circle.(Cross-Tanka)

no sunlight through stars dreams escaped,misty sparkling have darkness sight far night meeting thoughtful rebirth passing minutes,coming circle * Cross-tanka can be read in all ways:up to down,backwards,to the left,right,in steps up,down,in diagonal.You should just to stop where you wish to make sense of mini haiku (without 5-7-5 rules) 1.no dreams have night passing minutes coming,circle. 2.circle coming minutes passing,night have dreams, no sunlight through misty stars. 3.no sunlight,escaped, sight far, rebirth circle. There are about hundred or more variations.

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Date: 4/19/2010 7:08:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Audrey. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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