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Cinquain Modern--Sleep

Sleep friend, foe snoring, rest, rattle peaceful ease, magical, mystic Somber

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2013 5:34:00 AM

Doris, I like this one..Mom

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/27/2010 10:35:00 AM

hi, Doris! nice way to point out a morden sleep. by the way how is your mom,..p.d.

Skat A

Date: 8/27/2010 9:59:00 AM

AMAZING DORIS, CHARMING AS WELL*luv~SKAT

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/26/2010 4:47:00 PM

a mystic slumber. yay! awesome write.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/26/2010 3:48:00 AM

Interesting write Doris, I love the form as well.. love Wilma

Charles Henderson

Date: 8/26/2010 1:29:00 AM

Soup mail waiting, Charles

Charles Henderson

Date: 8/25/2010 9:00:00 PM

I do like cinquain. Don't know why I don't do more of it. This one is very nice. Charles

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2010 7:04:00 PM

Enjoyedthe images that are very apt, Doris

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/25/2010 2:48:00 PM

Your cinquain sets a very restful mood, Doris. Well done! Love, Carolyn