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Cinquain Eight

Job left behind now looking forward I stand at attention waiting

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/16/2013 10:48:00 AM

Oh no... I'm sure with your skills and your faith you will find something else. Hope all is well with you!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/15/2013 10:05:00 PM

Poignant way of describing the unemployment line. I hope this is fictitious, Rick! You really excel in the cinquain form. I'm amazed at just how many short forms there are. Septolet is another interesting one.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/16/2013 6:47:00 AM

No it's not fiction. I left two days ago.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/15/2013 9:10:00 PM

Sounds exciting Rick....it's all how you look at change, best of luck in your wait! I am on vacation in Disney, Flordia! Just me and my two younger boys, our first trip of many : )

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/16/2013 6:49:00 AM

It's good to be at the happiest place on earth. I hope you have a blast. Your boys will never forget this Experiance.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2013 3:00:00 PM

Kind of like my hubbie starting his new business and it's scary as heck!! good one.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2013 7:19:00 PM

Yes I plan to take some time for myself to think about what I want to do.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/15/2013 2:16:00 PM

When a door closes...look for a window...a window of opportunity. This could be the best thing to happen. God will lead you...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2013 7:20:00 PM

Looking forward to what he will come up with.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/15/2013 11:58:00 AM

Great write. Well done! AO

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2013 7:20:00 PM

Thanks A.O

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/15/2013 8:34:00 AM

This is a great Cinquain addressing such a common yet unsettling topic. Thanks.. I now know the format for a Cinquain, and enjoyed the lesson through your talented write.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2013 7:21:00 PM

Thanks Kim