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Cinquain # 12 and 35(With Apologies To Bob Dylan)

Walking Walking real fast Walk on gossamer wings Walking like the vision that you are Walking

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/10/2009 6:51:00 PM

nicely penned

Date: 10/10/2009 9:27:00 AM

Interesting use of repetition for a thought provoking poem. I really like the third line. Keep on writing! Karen

Adell Foster

Date: 10/7/2009 10:29:00 AM

I love Bob Dylan my friend, this is a fabulous write, I could almost hear him lending voice to your well penned words. Thank you for sharing the read. :-) Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/6/2009 4:08:00 PM

Bob Dylan is an awesome source of inspiration. Keep walking, Matthew, but please stop and grace us with more of your writing whenever your legs tire. This is a lovely image! Love, Carolyn

Donna Golden

Date: 10/4/2009 5:42:00 PM

Matthew, I couldn't help reading this with a Bob Dylan voice in my head! :o) Nice to see anything you post, my friend! Donna

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/3/2009 9:48:00 AM

Interesting write. I like the repetition here. Keep writing. Sara