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Cinquain # 12 and 35(with apologies to Bob Dylan)

Walking Walking real fast Walk on gossamer wings Walking like the vision that you are Walking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/10/2009 6:51:00 PM
nicely penned
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Date: 10/10/2009 9:27:00 AM
Interesting use of repetition for a thought provoking poem. I really like the third line. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/7/2009 10:29:00 AM
I love Bob Dylan my friend, this is a fabulous write, I could almost hear him lending voice to your well penned words. Thank you for sharing the read. :-) Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 10/6/2009 4:08:00 PM
Bob Dylan is an awesome source of inspiration. Keep walking, Matthew, but please stop and grace us with more of your writing whenever your legs tire. This is a lovely image! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/4/2009 5:42:00 PM
Matthew, I couldn't help reading this with a Bob Dylan voice in my head! :o) Nice to see anything you post, my friend! Donna
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Date: 10/3/2009 9:48:00 AM
Interesting write. I like the repetition here. Keep writing. Sara
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