Cinders and Steam

There they rested on rusting rails so regal yet so stark.
An old steam engine and its caboose now sit silent in the park.
Since I was on a casual stroll and had some time to squander,
I sat upon a beckoning bench, its yesteryears to ponder.

In my mind's eye I saw this Goliath racing down the rails,
Spewing billowing smoke and hearing its melancholy wails.
The engineer consulted his watch, anxious to meet his goals.
With elbows and cinders flying, the fireman stoked the coals!

I reckoned it towed freight cars as part of its ponderous load,
And of course free-spirited hoboes, those vagabonds of the road.
I'm sure its odyssey crossed desert sands and verdant prairies,
And coursed thro' mountain cols as high as eagles' aeries.

I envisioned sleek Pullman cars it pulled with happy folk aboard,
Enjoying the grandeur of this nation as down the track it roared!
Did it witness sad goodbyes as it carried soldiers off to strife?
Alas, did it carry a hero's coffin who had sacrificed his life?

What a thrill watching a steam engine thundering down the line.
I'll return again to reminisce before this venerable shrine.
Startled by a diesel train and its raucous klaxon across the way,
I wakened from my reverie and slowly walked away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Alex Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 5:41 AM
Great descriptive narration in a beautiful rhyme form. Congratulations!
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 3:10 AM
Congratulations on your first place win in my contest Robert, and thank you for submitting this amazingly crafted poem! The verses 'Did it witness sad goodbyes as it carried soldiers off to strife? Alas, did it carry a hero's coffin who had sacrificed his life?' Oh my, THAT brought me to tears! My dad served in WWII and lost his cousin and best friend. Your poem totally captivated me as well as those who helped me to judge my contest. Your poem was in the 1st place category with each of us!
Hinshaw Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Thank you so much, BJ. i'M honored that you considered it worthy of a lst place win. Best to you as you continue your poetic journey - Bob H
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 5:46 AM
Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Robert. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 6:39 AM
Many congratulations Robert on your win in Carol's fine contest with this well written piece on the steamtrain. They have such a magnetic appeal to spotters in the UK >> James
Johnson Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 6:18 PM
I have enjoyed reading the poems in this congest. It has brought out the best and this is a great romp down memory lane. Thanks Robert and congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:19 PM
Congrats on this well deserved win, Bob
Freeman Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 4:35 PM
Congratulation, my friend on another winner circle write, worthy indeed. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:22 PM
Major congrats Bob on your winning poem in Carol's contest with this excellent write .. wonderful words and special quality.. enjoy another momentous victory my friend..with luv..
Brown Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:17 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Robert. Love, Carol
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