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Cinders....

Cinders in my eye, looking at the sky, a tear running dry Cinders on the road, they dump another load, to help me in the snow Cinders on the ground, lying all around, high desert Oregon-bound Cinders in my nose, abrading all my clothes, the color of brick and rose Cinders in the air, suddenly aware, forest fire over there Embers whisper ash, in the aftermath..... .....and dream....... .....in slumber..... .....of Cinders....

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Date: 7/12/2010 1:35:00 PM
Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:03:00 PM
This has inspired a nice little piece called "Sky" I will post it very soon ~Rick
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:56:00 PM
Nice pondering thoughts, enjoyed~Rick
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Date: 7/6/2010 5:51:00 PM
I hope that this is not your life and you are experiencing one of those fires..Sara
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