Cinderella What Now

CINDERELLA WHAT NOW

I’ve often seen you zoom past Mars,
Blonde hair flowing and blowing
In the breeze of the milky way,
And its trillions of stars.
I so longed for you to be mine,
I imagined us sitting in the curve of the moon
As it slowly began to wane,
And we watched planet earth beneath us,
And the gods of the seas sending tides
Out, splashing foaming and dancing,
Raging, loving that God and the Moon,
Chose mother nature to run this chore,
By being bossy and certainly imposing!
Mystery girl what is your name,
Is it true you are called Cinderella,
You must be the fourth generation,
And according to the invitation
To the ball, your great grandparents were,
Prince Charming and Cinderella
The rich prince and the poor cinder girl
With whom Prince Charming fell in love.
And now you have all the wealth you need,
Choose me, tell your dad what you really want,
And take, a slight tumble,
Learn to become a little humble.
You have captivated my being,
Only of you do I dream.
I know you’re from Venus and hot,
Many suitors you have got,
From Jupiter, Mercury and Uranus,
And Saturn, which one of us 
Will it be,
For I want to marry you,
I have no jewels
To offer like the others,
I am not poor, and will cherish you,
And give you a good life,
As my wife.
Only love and devotion,
From my heart with emotion.
Pretty lady all will be disclosed 
At the Ball, at which your father
Will name the lucky man.
You are stunning,
But for whom are you gunning?


The night arrives, all the eligible
Young men invited from every planet,
Arrive in high tech space ships,
Engineered to impress,
Like your emerald studded green 
Much admired ball gown, gems in excess,
Never in History has such a gown 
Been seen before,  
I’m on an emotional seesaw,
Your green eyes seem cold,
And your manner distant and bold.
The suitor finally named, Prince Zuma 
From Jupiter and you will be
Wife number ten.
You must think long and hard 
About this wedding,
You will be part of a harem,
I whisper in her ear,
I am leaving this pretentious scene
I’m afraid this match might 
have a sad ending,
You, being the subject of this plight.,
Should you need me, contact details
In the hem of your pricey dress.
Think hard, your life has 
Become quite a mess,
Money has become your master,
You are not thinking of forever after.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Smith Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 12:48 PM
A fair and important question, we should all be asking. Penned in the right color of ink, that will still be readable a thousand years from now, along with springboks and hopefully all blacks. Best regards as always David in NZ
Zahid Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 11:17 AM
Love your imaginations. What an amazing story teller you are
Lindley Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 9:25 AM
You my good friend are an exceptionally beautiful story teller. This rates in the stratosphere with me. A most definitive fav for me too. God bless you.
Baker Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 4:52 PM
What an engaging and interesting tale you tell. I enjoyed going back and finding this one, Jennifer. Thanks for sharing your fabulous stories through your poetry, my dear friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Wolf Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 7:53 PM
Cinderella the 4th (?) has become a product of her times, I see, thanks to the clever transformation created by one Jennifer P. ~ A. Nother Popped-Balloon
Poet Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:13 AM
Victor, your poem is simply exquisite. It captivates the senses with its vibrant imagery and evokes a profound emotional response. Your mastery of storytelling shines through every line, transporting us to a world where words come alive. The eloquent rhymes and seamless flow add an enchanting rhythm to the verses, mesmerizing the reader from beginning to end. Beyond its aesthetic appeal, your poem carries a significant message, reminding us of the power of words and the impact they can have on our lives. It is a true masterpiece that leaves a lasting impression on the soul.
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 3:51 AM
fun & unique look at Cinders' life
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September 3, 2023 at 3:23 PM
A wonderful tale of Cinderella - the fourth generation Jennifer. What will the outcome be I wonder, you’ve left the reader wanting more in this intriguing tale of folklore. So enjoyed the read… Belle
George Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 9:20 PM
A fantastic story full of suspense and thrill. Let the Prince think more and more and take a better decision. She will soon learn that there won't be any thrill in becoming part of a harem! Very imaginative story telling that we are caught in the spell of your narration, dear Jenny.
Ball Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 4:19 PM
WoW Jennifer. This story really makes one think about what happens next. After the ball, the courtship and then the wedding. Hmmmm maybe this prince ain't all he's cracked up to be. (wife number 10!?!) Good story my friend and then what happened! God Bless, JB
Romios Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 3:19 PM
Hi Greek Sis! What a creative Mind you have! My mind only concentrates for short spurts. But am truly grateful that it functions at all.)))) Your poem could be made into a movie!!! Money, well earned is a good thing…God never said Money was evil. Greed is evil. Like the ordinary woman being jealous of her friends’ Diamond ring. Governments are the worst. Taking our taxes and giving us mandates in return, I sent you a soupmail with what you requested days ago. Check it out! Love, Panagiotaxx
Stark Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 3:50 AM
Beautiful
Ricci Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 5:10 AM
Jennifer Jennifer Jennifer. Why is it that we never see or think of the forever after or should I say the complete picture. We get caught up in glitter and flair. You leave us readers with thought to remember. I loved your title by the way for you incorporated her with your message wonderfully. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings now and always. (smile)
Situation Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 1:47 PM
Well played story and original ideals.
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August 19, 2023 at 6:37 AM
I agree with Eve, so creative is your write Jennifer! I was enthralled all the way through! What a fantastic story! Happy Saturday xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Hi Mike such a lovey comment thank-you. Im enthralled you enjoyed my poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
One Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 1:40 PM
You were always a great storyteller amd this poem is no exception... love the rhymes and flow to it and a very important message... hope all is well
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 1:00 PM
Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading this wonderful story/write again. Have a great day with your win............
Proxenos Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 1:47 PM
Thank=you Paula - have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Roper Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 12:14 AM
Great creative write, my friend. Love and enjoyed reading. Hope you are doing well.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 12:26 PM
WOW!!! What a story/write. Are you making this into a book??? Have a great day.............
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