Cider and Sunset

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Cider, you,me…in front of an insouciant fire. Cinnamon cider swirling in cloissone cups. Life, a perfect sunset in your amber-chocolate eyes, I dearly sought. Later, to our bed, to peacefully retire. The calico cat’s tail wound about our feet. The tartan blanket embellished us in beauty. Creating wedding plans, a pleasurable duty. In graciousness, that we so blessed did meet.! 1/27/2023

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/31/2023 12:06:00 PM

Sweet, sweet cider and sunset. What more do you need? :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/28/2023 12:54:00 PM

Very lovely, poetic expression. Love means, no need for anything else. Then one knows, it is a moment of pure love. You get a FAVE!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/28/2023 3:24:00 PM

Hey, Joe, you have true love, my you are blessed and fortunate. I am lucky to have you as a reader to share that with. I will let your FAVE be my anniversary present tomorrow. He died very young, but his spirit of full self expression lives on in my writing.i do miss him.you and he have similar personalities. Panagiota xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/28/2023 12:19:00 PM

Such a cozy scene! I really like the amber chocolate eyes line, my own hubby has brown eyes that would be kind of that color, will think of this the next time I enjoy a hot cider~

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/28/2023 3:16:00 PM

Great to see you Michelle. And wonderful he has those color eyes. I was widowed at age 30..Tomorrow Would have been my anniversary. I spent decades alone! I relived this scene. He changed my life, dear friend forever.. Hot cider and those warm eyes…awesome! Be blended. Panagiota xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/28/2023 4:11:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, A lovely way to to describe a beautiful sunset. I enjoy an apple cider either hot or cold. Good both ways. Hugs . /Darlene/ xxx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/28/2023 11:58:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, yes we both like cats and cider. Your welcome. I will try to stay warm . No snow! No rain! Lucky you. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/28/2023 11:38:00 AM

Hello Darlene.. I listed this them. You and I have much in common. Thank you for sticking by my side for four years. We both like C and C. LOL Cider and cats. Stay warm. Cold here, too but no snow, wind or rain. Pangagiota xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/27/2023 8:09:00 PM

Lovely, especially: Cinnamon cider swirling in cloissone cups. Have a blessed weekend!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/27/2023 9:15:00 PM

Hi Kim-So nice to hear from you Ann and such a nice comment. I also like the thin line you did. Great minds thinking the same track! Hugs, Panagiota x o