Churned

Milk is churned to Produce butter, anger churned Leads to strife, hardness (Think about it.)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2009 12:00:00 PM

I thought about it. And I agree. Thank you for sharing and making me think. Love, Carol

Veronica Joseph

Date: 10/26/2009 11:16:00 AM

and revenge, as addicting as meth. Great poem!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/25/2009 2:34:00 PM

I'm smiling mischievously Sara... I guess we better watch what we churn!!! Love you. (Tell your husband NOT to WORRY... I'M NOT DIAL! LOL That one still makes me laugh from time to time!) Poetry is so much FUN!!! Lovingly, Dane

James Fraser

Date: 10/25/2009 7:41:00 AM

A lot to be read and disected from your words Sara, nice write >> James

John Freeman

Date: 10/25/2009 7:32:00 AM

Yes hardness, is not characteristic to a heart of the mercy of love. Strife is as cruel as the grave of hell. Have a good day Sara. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Katherine Stella

Date: 10/25/2009 7:21:00 AM

When I read this it reminded me of my dad and all his bitterness toward us kids outstanding write and very thought provoking sara thanks for your kind comments to my work also keep up the great work