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Church Picnics

Summertime memories of better days Playing outside way past dark Bungalo was the community pool Church picnics at Dutch Hill Park Sliding boards and old metal swings A box for the little ones filled with sand There were monkey bars and seesaws A merry go round that we turned by hand A pavilion full of picnic tables Where neighbors sat together to eat And the old beat up wooden dance hall That gave little relief from the heat Usually they had a polka band Playing polkas, waltzes and rock n’ roll Wooden floor jammed with people dancing Those memories touch my soul Sometimes we’d run down to the baseball field Play ball until we were soaked in sweat Or sneak down the woods when we got a chance We’d all have a cigarette Then we would walk back to the picnic Get food at the concession stand Carry it over to the dance hall And listen to the band The picnics lasted until late at night Neighbors sat talking and having a good time A hamburger was only twenty cents And a beer was only a dime Take me back to those innocent days Where my memories still roam To church picnics at Dutch Hill Park Saints Peter and Paul and Saint Jerome.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/16/2009 10:14:00 PM
Vince, i bet all who read this are having flashes of their past, i did - and it was a joy to read, as it was to look back, cheers for this - James
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Date: 5/12/2009 4:37:00 PM
Oh the memories you stirred! Nicely written. How I remember life being like that. Even just sitting on the front porch and enjoying the evening with family and friends. Thanks for the memories.
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Date: 5/12/2009 10:04:00 AM
A beautiful and nostalgic Rhyme. I went back to the place I grew up after twenty years and everything seemed soooo... small and narrow, even the elevator. What happened to that little, blond girl? Time and its passing by :( Thank you for your comment on my Attempting Freedom (My Survival). Love, Iolanda
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Date: 5/12/2009 5:26:00 AM
Howdy, Vince. As usual, your stuff brings a pang of nostalgia to this old being. I remember all of this. I used to get wings out of the cigarette machine. They were 3 cents cheaper than camels or luckies. Hey! camels were STRONG! Like, I was 15 years old. Great write! Love, daver
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Date: 5/9/2009 10:17:00 AM
I remember some myself when I was a boy in chicago, in the south beer would be ok with me but you know, lol
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Date: 5/7/2009 12:40:00 PM
MAGNIFICENT!!!! Love it ..when can we go? Do you know I was one of the children who got their tongue stuck to the frozen monkey bars in the winter??? NO laughing at me, I bet you guessed that? Light & Love
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Date: 5/7/2009 12:05:00 PM
Vince, I love this history streaming fromthe pen ... the sustained rhyming ... the etching of imagery on the page ... the talent that poetry sets to rage ... total and complete mastery ... I feel you in each line.
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Date: 5/7/2009 10:27:00 AM
Dear Vince, YOU definitely took me back to the good old days Hamburger twenty cents A beer only a dime YOU reveal YOUR age my Friend with these prices Great Write Thanks for the memories and Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/7/2009 3:41:00 AM
Oh, the olden days. What fond memories they do bring. Your poem has excellent rhyme and definitely holds interest. Very well written, Vince. Your talent shows through strongly.
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Date: 5/6/2009 3:20:00 PM
Hey Vince, it's been a while! Great poem (no surprise) as usual! XOXO always Leah
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Date: 5/5/2009 6:54:00 PM
It sounds wonderful. Closest I can imagine doesn't justify. -AA
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Date: 5/5/2009 10:24:00 AM
Memorable days Vince,Thank you for your comments on my blog today
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Date: 5/5/2009 7:55:00 AM
Vince, treasure-filled memories!! well done, my friend!!! the mention of the Saints at the end... I'm Catholic, just curious, no worries if too personal a question! I don't mean to intrude!! : ) Jim alo.. thank you for gracious comments! and congrats on your feature!!! Jim
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Date: 5/5/2009 12:41:00 AM
What a delightful write, capturing treasured memories, moments in history to share with those closest to you...such freedom and business seems to be missed from our society today, how good it would be to turn back the clocks a little and share such good times once more... 'Bermuda Triangle' afore mentioned by Carolyn intigues me too!! Thanks for your welcome views/comments, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/4/2009 12:09:00 PM
Church picnics are rich in wonderful memories like the ones you describe. In Jersey, our Catholic school had free concerts by the "Four Seasons" at our picnics. You poem makes me feel like a kid again! (And please tell me about your experience in the Bermuda Triangle.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/4/2009 11:40:00 AM
Great writing, you painted a vivid picture of another time long ago. Nice job.
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Date: 5/4/2009 10:53:00 AM
Hello Vincent Suzadail Jr. And All of Your Precious Loves!!!:):)~Another wonderfully written write of a once upon a time~Always expressing sincere gratitudes; which is good I believe!:)~But someday, You and Your Loves, shall have an ternal paradise, which shall 'never' become a once upon a time!!!:):)~"Blessings and Warmth Always To You and Yours, John!":)~"Lovely Write!!"~Bye Brother!:)
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Date: 5/4/2009 9:56:00 AM
nostalgia and memories,we all cherish those innocent days---wonderful----charma
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:01:00 AM
Sneaking off for a cigarette at a church picnic....you naughty, naughty boys!!! (did you by little packs of Sen-Sens to disguise your tale-tale breath??) gosh were we lucky, or what? growing up in such great times...all these great memories...I love these nostalgic poems..you are so good at writing!!:)
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