Chug-A-Lug Pub Song

When the day dwindles pale...with my tall mug of ale
I'm a weepy ole' fool , it is quite plain to see 
I'll  shed many a tear ore'  the wee smallest thing
I am known to spill oceans, with a tall chug-a-lug
There'll be tubs splashing tears, all over your head!

For,.......... I love my old mates and I'm lovin' my brew
I have a dilemma, it's the bluest of blues
but I can't decide which I'm holdin' more dear
a fine league of shipmates or my lagers of beer

I moon over moonlight shining over the sill
While I drink with my matey, who is over the hill
O', ......he'll tell me a story of his granny who's ill
And my eyes will start wellin' and a river will spill!

For,.......... I love my old mates and I'm lovin' my brew
I have a dilemma, it's the bluest of blues
but I can't decide which I'm holdin' more dear
a fine league of shipmates or my lagers of beer

There is lint in my eye over sharing goodbyes 
I'll lament just a bit over missing Ma's pies
When a goat has been bitten by a snake that is long
I will leak like a bucket ..for a world that's gone wrong

If I must kick the bucket, so what if I do?
And if there's a heaven and the devil's not due 
You'll know for sure I have a smile upon my face
from seeing my shipmates and from drinkin' my brew!

For,.......... I love my old mates and I'm lovin' my brew
I have a dilemma, it's the bluest of blues
but I can't decide which I'm holdin' more dear
a fine league of shipmates or my lagers of beer !!




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For Cyndi's "Raise the Roof Pub Song" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/22/2013 7:43:00 PM
Oh it is so much fun being back and reading the great poetry. This was so much fun. Congratulations Carrie on your no. 1. I really was scared to try this contest but I gave it a shot. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/20/2013 6:44:00 AM
Beautiful! You're unique. Many Congrats to you on your well deserved win. AO
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Date: 5/18/2013 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations!! a very xool pub song poem... it was a joy coming back here to read all of Cyndi's expression of raising the roof winning poem... hugs and more hugs.. :-) ~ Linda
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Date: 5/18/2013 5:35:00 PM
Fantastic Carrie I could really picture this old salt! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/17/2013 3:54:00 PM
Carrieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, Send the Pub Address...we're all going to meet you there!
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Date: 5/16/2013 11:28:00 AM
Carrie I love the whit in your poem. Congratulations on a well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/15/2013 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie. Your raucous winner fills the bill perfectly. -Red
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Date: 5/15/2013 11:26:00 AM
Carrie, the poem sounds like fun. Congratulations with your pub song. ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/15/2013 10:04:00 AM
What a range of talent you have, dear Carrie! Now to put these words to a tune..
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Date: 5/15/2013 8:09:00 AM
I got a question my friend...Is there ANYTHING you can't do and be the best at it?...Speaking (singing) of songs,Tina Turner said (sang) it best... 'You're simply the best, better than all the rest'...
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Date: 5/15/2013 4:29:00 AM
THe quality of this write demanded top marks...the alliteration of league/lager and bold blue. You "mate" feel... yup, good stuff! Check out my blog, chum, when you have the time... the winners will make you chuckle.
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Date: 5/15/2013 12:57:00 AM
awesome song indeed :) congrats on the win :)
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Date: 5/3/2013 8:32:00 PM
Carrie, sounds like fun... good luck in this interesting contest...LINDA
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Date: 5/3/2013 8:02:00 PM
My, my. ....this is the perfect pub song. I wanted to be there with you singing along. A sure winner in my book. SuZ
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Date: 5/3/2013 7:51:00 PM
Oh Carrie this is awesome....good luck in the contest....
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Date: 5/3/2013 7:39:00 PM
I'm rocking on the bar stool...cheers let's have another.....good luck in the contest....looks like a winner to me...
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Date: 5/3/2013 7:38:00 PM
lol. Lovely pub song, Carrie. The very best of luck to you in Cyndi's contest. :)
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