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Chrysanthemums

The Crysanthemums don’t know what to do It was cold, now it is hot, colors are fading too Some blossoms wilting, but the rest still alive A mixture of beauty until weather takes a dive When winter rolls its white carpet relentlessly Leaving the cold snowflakes on the plants to see Heidi Sands 9/26/17

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Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2017 12:26:00 PM

Lovely write Heidi...enjoyed

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2017 1:58:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. I am glad you enjoyed this :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/27/2017 4:40:00 AM

They will thrive in about a month! I know the weather is bonkers right now, but tomorrow it will cool down here and it will bring with it wonderful weather, to me anyway! We have a festival here on Saturday and it's supposed to be 66 degrees and sunny with 37% humidity! Can't get much better than that! Snowflakes will come soon enough, so the Chrysanthemums will enjoy it eventually! What a beautiful poem, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2017 6:17:00 AM

That would be nice Russell. Some of them aren't looking so well. I hope you have a great time at the fair. It sounds like you are going to have perfect weather! Enjoy! Thank you for your kind support :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/26/2017 6:50:00 PM

Flowers say so much to us about life. I lost my big red chrysanthemums last year, I believe it was. Don't like wintertime!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2017 6:54:00 PM

Yes, they don't last through winter :( Thanks for your comment Sunlite.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/26/2017 5:20:00 PM

Lovely Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2017 5:46:00 PM

Thank you Vijay :)