Christopher Round-Robin

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*Image of Winnie-the-Pooh Spoon Race by the sponsor. AUDIO: by Ka'au Crater Boys singing 'House at Pooh Corner' popularized by Kenny Loggins Christopher Round-Robin Christopher Robin, whose name bears o'er song, strained mid per sideline crowd of the racetrack, praising those three most skilled entrants along, Piglet, Tigger, plus Pooh Bear hears soundtrack. Strained mid per sideline crowd of the racetrack, ah, the well-versed Rabbit and his small friends, Piglet, Tigger, plus Pooh Bear hears soundtrack, Owl talks and sees while y'all listen, sight lends. Ah, the well-versed Rabbit and his small friends, praising those three most skilled entrants along, Owl talks and sees while y'all listen, sight lends, Christopher Robin, whose name bears o'er song. *Photo #4 2021 August 01 *2nd Place* Pantoum Rhyme 1 ~~Eve Roper: Judged 2021 August 13

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/17/2021 10:50:00 AM

So many favorite characters highlighted in your delightful pantoum William. Love your creative phrases and unique expression. Congratulations on your win my friend. Aloha blessings!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/17/2021 12:08:00 PM

Sam, I know that Eve views her trade passionately and shares that outlook with us in some of her contests, and in doing so, I try my best. Your expressions are gratifying my friend, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/16/2021 9:22:00 AM

Great Work. Congratulations on your win!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/16/2021 9:36:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj, this was a fun write my friend, Aloha!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/13/2021 8:44:00 PM

William, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/13/2021 9:00:00 PM

Eve, thanks for fun the opportunity my friend, Aloha!