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Christmas Windows - Building a Snowman

When the snow is deep and wet enough to pack I look out my living room window to watch kids build a snowman Wouldn't you know that old felt hat is gone from the closet and My meerschaum pipe (this will never do) gone from the rack Robert has given his own red scarf While little Sue with not another thing to do has stolen the black lids off our plastic coffee cups Never have I seen those kids work with such love's labor The man is rolled and packed together before I can tire It is just noon and typical Denver The sun is out thermometer way up! So before the kids can sigh the melt I pop out the door and cry, "What a wonderful snowman! This calls for a reward!" Then I ease on him my favorite tie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/25/2010 8:18:00 AM
what a precious poem, DAver. So you lived in Denver? And I don't recall ever asking you. YOu had children then?? I will see your other window poem, that way I can remember I saw them all! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/29/2009 3:03:00 PM
Reminds me of my childhood and has me smiling. Thanks for the day brightener! Hope we don't get as much snow as last year this upcoming season. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good evening! Karen
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Date: 12/29/2008 7:55:00 AM
Absolutely lovely, made me smile at the sheer whimsy in this poem. Very well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 12/27/2008 4:56:00 PM
This is my first "formal" snowman. God Bless Daver. Merry Christmas. Vince
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Date: 12/22/2008 3:38:00 AM
What a joy you are, Daver!!!! This is one of my most favorite things to do with my kids...sometimes the old chill-man even get's bottle caps for eyes when the snow is too deep to find pebbles. lol cheers! Love, Kristin
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Date: 12/21/2008 9:29:00 AM
This caused a nice smile this am..Do you know I've never made a snowman, don't get to the snow often living in sunny(rainy) California. Hope you get a tie for xmas...:). BG
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Date: 12/21/2008 9:02:00 AM
How cute is this...?? Bless you for giving in and letting Mr. Snowman dress is style! Maybe there will be another tie and pipe for you under the Christmas tree this year (although, I know, sometimes people have their favorites already broken in) God Bless...and Happy Holidays. This one makes me smile! ~LOve, Carrie
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Date: 12/21/2008 7:04:00 AM
This is so sweet, I just loved it. I could see the children grabbing the items for their beloved snowman and working tirelessly to make him just right! Wonderful images, really enoyable. God bless and happy holidays! :) Amy
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Date: 12/21/2008 6:51:00 AM
Another terrific write from you Daver. Pictures painted so brilliantly with words. I am there with every word watching this all unfold. Great job!
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Date: 12/21/2008 6:24:00 AM
Oh Daver, your Christmas Windows are precious and priceless - and so is that big, beautiful heart of yours! May the child in you remain as alive and as shining bright as it is this season. You give so much to the spirit of Christmas and to the child within us all with every write. Merry beautiful wonderful Christmas to you and yours! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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