Christmas Tree

A Christmas Tree setting; Lights pulsating; Throbbing color wheel, Chase.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 12/16/2018 1:22:00 PM

Beautifully worded, I love the clever tree shape, too! ;)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/16/2018 1:28:00 PM

Thank you, it was a lucky accident, as it is a Lanterne rather than a Shape poem. I didn't even notice until the first comments. Some nice Christmas synchronicity.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/16/2018 11:44:00 AM

What a darling little Christmas tree you have made; I think this is a concrete poem!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/16/2018 11:45:00 AM

I never thought of a Lanterne as a tree-shaped poem but, you know, you've got something there. Thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 12/16/2018 10:43:00 AM

Beauty to the eyes and warmth in the heart! The spirit of Christmas incarcerated in the shape of your wonderful Lanterne.. You have an impressive talent with the different types of poetry! I do appreciate! Enjoyed reading.. Best regards M.L. Kiser.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/16/2018 10:52:00 AM

Thank you so much, Besma, I'm thrilled that you think so. I like experimenting with different forms, as some poems do better in certain forms than others. Regards to you, as well.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/16/2018 10:43:00 AM

Wow , I can see lights circling around a tree :) Well done.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/16/2018 10:50:00 AM

I do love chasers although, the drive the cat crazy. Thanks so much, Heidi.