Christmas Tins

Third neighbor in two hours to bring over a Christmas tin.
Fruitcakes are in two of them; we don’t bother to open them.
They are going to go to the office where no one will eat them.
Which is strange because they eat everything else.

Are those homemade cookies? Someone asked, spying Mrs. Gee. 
She always brings us homemade cookies. The wrestling begins.
We both want to get the first piece. Divinity, peanut butter fudge.
We are in a frenzy by the time we get the lid off and see another fruitcake.

I’m not even going to open the door to her next year I say.
I hate her, my sister says. 
I’m going to go visit her, my brother says. I know she’s got better stuff over there.
We practically kill each other trying to be the first one out the door.
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Babbit Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 10:01 AM
I love fruitcake too, more fruit then cake, skip the rum. My one neighbor always buys me clothes - a sweater, a shawl. I wonder do I look needy? Just grateful they each remember me.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 8:22 PM
That is so sweet!
Hankins Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 9:30 AM
So strange! I really, really, really do love fruitcake. I like to have a thin slice, and I'll eat on one for as long as it lasts. Love the jellied fruit. Also, love it if it is soaked in rum!!! Oh my...I guess I'll have to go out and buy one, 'cause no one ever gets me a fruitcake!
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December 20, 2021 at 8:23 PM
You must have some good ones. All the ones I ever have tasted come in a tin and are HARD as drywall.
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