Barbara Gorelick Poet Limerick

Christmas Shopping

 



I bravely went Xmas shopping at the mall
Took my plastic, trying to buy gifts for all
I started to sigh
then began to cry
Ill be paying for this junk until next fall...


  

For Carolyn's contest

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Audrey Haick November 29, 2010 at 12:29 PM Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Barbara! Love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown November 29, 2010 at 5:37 AM Congratulations Barbara on your win in the "Commercialized Holiday Humor" contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson November 28, 2010 at 10:05 PM All too true. Congratulations Barbara. Love, Joyce

Nette Onclaud November 28, 2010 at 6:26 PM winner is surely is, barbara.. congrats!! warmest, nette

Robert A. Dufresne November 28, 2010 at 4:53 PM perfect commercial christmas sentiment and concise! Well done Barbara

Andrea Dietrich November 28, 2010 at 4:43 PM Barbara, though this was very short, it was also VERY good. Congratulations, dear. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta November 28, 2010 at 2:22 PM Congratulations on this win for the excellent entry to the contest, Barbara

Sara Kendrick November 28, 2010 at 12:57 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

John Freeman November 28, 2010 at 11:46 AM Ill be paying for this junk until next fall... Yep, araid so, Barbara. "Congratulations" Barbara, on a poem's worthy recognition. Agape, Moses

Iolanda Scripca November 28, 2010 at 11:02 AM You wrote a great Limerick here, dear Barbara. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Love, Iolanda and Repo Santa :)

Carolyn Devonshire November 28, 2010 at 7:23 AM Barbara, you and Audrey have a similar perspective on Christmas. Very good poem! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire November 16, 2010 at 5:15 PM :) Thanks for supporting the contest, dear LNC. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta November 16, 2010 at 1:12 PM realistic thoughts on how the Christmas affects the valet, barbara