Christmas Shopping

I bravely went Xmas shopping at the mall Took my plastic, trying to buy gifts for all I started to sigh then began to cry Ill be paying for this junk until next fall...
For Carolyn's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/29/2010 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Barbara! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/29/2010 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in the "Commercialized Holiday Humor" contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 10:05:00 PM
All too true. Congratulations Barbara. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/28/2010 6:26:00 PM
winner is surely is, barbara.. congrats!! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:53:00 PM
perfect commercial christmas sentiment and concise! Well done Barbara
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:43:00 PM
Barbara, though this was very short, it was also VERY good. Congratulations, dear. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/28/2010 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations on this win for the excellent entry to the contest, Barbara
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Date: 11/28/2010 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/28/2010 11:46:00 AM
Ill be paying for this junk until next fall... Yep, araid so, Barbara. "Congratulations" Barbara, on a poem's worthy recognition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/28/2010 11:02:00 AM
You wrote a great Limerick here, dear Barbara. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Love, Iolanda and Repo Santa :)
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Date: 11/28/2010 7:23:00 AM
Barbara, you and Audrey have a similar perspective on Christmas. Very good poem! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/16/2010 5:15:00 PM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, dear LNC. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/16/2010 1:12:00 PM
realistic thoughts on how the Christmas affects the valet, barbara
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