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CHRISTMAS MASTERPIECE

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He started with tinsel~ because, well, it was shiny. Draped it like ivy, a haphazard garland stuck to bark with stolen gum. The ornaments came next: acorn caps, a button from someone’s coat, a soda tab, and one fragile, forgotten robin’s eggshell balanced precariously on the highest twig. His crowning touch? A popcorn strand, half-eaten, strung with the dedication of a creature who believes snacks improve everything. The tree tilted slightly under the weight of his zeal, but oh!~ how it sparkled in the December sun, a wild, crooked work of art only a squirrel could call perfect.
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Gauthier Avatar
January 1, 2026 at 6:30 PM
Totally chatming ~
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 11:05 AM
I like this! Your tales are cute, dear Sara!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 3:13 PM
thanks, Kim, for your kind words. Glad you liked this tale
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 10:24 AM
Dear Sara, truly a masterpiece! Your light verse makes me smile and savour every moment of the holiday season! To me, Squirrels are the cutest creatures and I watch them sometimes in my backyard - your poem is going to my favourite list. Please write more poems like this. Merry Christmas to you and Bill.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 3:14 PM
thank you, dear Mala, for your visit. I'm grateful my poem made you smile and appreciate the holidays. I appreciate your fave as well. I'll write more poems like this from time to time, as they are a delight to compose Merry Christmas to you and yours, hugs, Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 10:15 AM
Thus is indeed a work of art, dear Sara.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 3:15 PM
well, thank you, Victor! Color me grateful.
Godwin Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 9:56 AM
Your poem is as cute as that squirrels face, I have an urge to touch his tongue. I have seen some hilarious cats and Christmas trees pictures lately, love them as I deal with that now as I lifelong have with my furry loves. I put a true story in Constance's contest, yes, Constance (now I'm doubting myself.) I enjoyed this, it's an entertaining poem. The captcha or whatever it is called is DAM, how Christmasy.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 3:16 PM
thanks for your visit, CayCay. I, too, just want to hug that little squirrel's cheeks. Weird about the 'captcha' I think my poem in Constance's contest was real as well. I need to check
George Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 8:30 AM
On his face there is the satisfaction of having created a masterpiece. :) Quite cute is your protagonist dear Sara.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 3:15 PM
aww, thank you Valsa. Grateful you found my protagonist cute. :-) hugs, Sara
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