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Christmas Ice

Winter skaters on Christmas' ice steps slippery glossed in-flight, nice slide and glide from ice to snow shiver, shaken, frozen toes fell on hidden nests of field mice.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2021 1:54:00 PM

Not a happy event for sure. Creative way to go. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2021 12:15:00 PM

cute ending there. Congrats on your win.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/9/2021 7:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A cute and fun write. Enjoy your win and weekend with blessings..................

Jan Allison

Date: 1/8/2021 4:10:00 PM

what a fun one DM, many congrats DM:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Feltham

Date: 1/8/2021 11:51:00 AM

I hope you didn't squash those little mice. :-) congratulations on your winning placement.

Mark Koplin

Date: 1/8/2021 7:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, DM!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/8/2021 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations on the win DM! Linda

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/30/2020 10:56:00 AM

Poor mice...All the best to you in 2021.