Christmas Ice

Winter skaters on Christmas' ice
 steps slippery glossed in-flight, nice
 slide and glide from ice to snow
 shiver, shaken, frozen toes
fell on hidden nests of field mice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 1:54 PM
Not a happy event for sure. Creative way to go. Congrats on your winner. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 12:15 PM
cute ending there. Congrats on your win.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute and fun write. Enjoy your win and weekend with blessings..................
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 4:10 PM
what a fun one DM, many congrats DM:-) hugs jan xx
Chamberlain Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 11:51 AM
I hope you didn't squash those little mice. :-) congratulations on your winning placement.
Koplin Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations on your win, DM!
Fowler Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations on the win DM! Linda
Michael Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 10:56 AM
Poor mice...All the best to you in 2021.
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