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Lumps in sauce, In a rush... Meal off course. Is meat dry, Sprouts look mush - Want to cry! Food tastes fine, Turkey’s lush - Let’s drink wine! Have a Merry 3-Cubed Christmas Poetry Contest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich Checked with How Many syllables 12/22/19

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Date: 12/30/2019 3:43:00 PM
Sounds like my cooking Jan. This was fun. Congratulations on your Second placement! I hope your Christmas was merry! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/29/2019 1:06:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, dear Jan :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/29/2019 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium finish, Jan! Sorry I did not turn up for Christmas Dinner after all that :) Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/28/2019 8:59:00 PM
Many congrats Jan on your podium win with this fun poem - well done. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 12/28/2019 4:30:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Jan. Janice
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Date: 12/28/2019 2:55:00 PM
This was so cool, Jan. Big foodie that I am, I love this fun poem you wrote. Congrats on your podium placement! (still can't get over how sauce and course sound same to the Brits!!)
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Date: 12/24/2019 2:33:00 PM
Nicely done Jan, Merry Christmas to you and yours..
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Date: 12/23/2019 7:49:00 PM
This was great. My kid had to cook this year, at Thanksgiving. It did not go as she planned. LIfe happens. :) It was wild. The turkey... well.. missing in action and a dinner had to be bought... :) Love your write... Merry Christmas... you are a great poet... Ann
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Date: 12/24/2019 2:57:00 AM
Oh dear Ann at least she tried, I doubt my son would know where to start doing a roast dinner lol as for Turkey we don;t eat it lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/23/2019 4:17:00 PM
Merry Christmas Jan … everything always turns out right, but the wine does help of course - catch you soon Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 12/23/2019 6:33:00 PM
much prefer a cup of tea these days lol:-) Cheers Lindsay, happy Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/23/2019 3:59:00 PM
Heck just drink that wine and all will be fine. lol Wishing you a very Merry Christmas and best wishes for 2020. love phyl
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Date: 12/23/2019 6:33:00 PM
thanks so much Phyl lovely to see you and my best wishes for the festive season:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/23/2019 5:17:00 AM
Your going to beat me again Sis! If I come in last place I am blaming you!! :-)
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Date: 12/23/2019 3:40:00 PM
lol Bobby my muse deserted me after I screwed up on the snowglobe poem - I did write another one but didn;t log on until yesterday and of course the contest is well past. i must post it still:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/23/2019 2:05:00 AM
perfect for the contest
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Date: 12/23/2019 3:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve, am hoping my muse is back:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/22/2019 8:05:00 PM
the hectic holiday meal prep...i would see this one, and have been there...good write, good to see you back :) hugs
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Date: 12/23/2019 3:38:00 PM
Thanks Sandra:-) hope you have a super time over the festive period:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/22/2019 4:29:00 PM
Hi Jan, This is a good festive poem for the contest theme. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Well done . PS, I am so happy to see you posting. I have missed you so much. I hope all is well. Happy Holidays to you and your family and friends:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/23/2019 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Alexis it is good to be back:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/22/2019 3:33:00 PM
Now you have made my Christmas merry! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 12/23/2019 3:37:00 PM
aww thanks Rico, I hope my muse doesnt desert me again:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/22/2019 11:27:00 AM
But it always turns out OK in the end Jan. Nice to see you back. Tom
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Date: 12/23/2019 3:37:00 PM
My muse still isn't firing on all cylinders but I hope to write and be on soup more often:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/22/2019 8:10:00 AM
Pass me a plate
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Date: 12/23/2019 3:36:00 PM
thanks so much TS:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/22/2019 8:07:00 AM
Jan, Welcome back!! A cute poem! Check your soup mail.
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Date: 12/23/2019 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Tania - everything now sorted thanks to your mail!!:-) hugs Jan xx

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