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Christmas Couplet

My last will and testament gives you all a giant farewell party, Rudolph said Which made Dasher, Dancer, and Prancer, our biggest goofballs and I wish he was dead. Written 12-18-2018 Contest: A Cute Christmas Couplet Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 12/25/2018 1:16:00 PM
Congrats to you, Caren, they wanted that party! Happy Happy!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/26/2018 2:28:00 AM
I know. It was an awful thought, but once there, I could not push it back into my head.
Date: 12/25/2018 1:13:00 PM
- Congratulations Caren, on your fourth prize, glory in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/26/2018 2:28:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year's my friend.
Date: 12/24/2018 6:02:00 PM
gosh a dark poem Caren, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/24/2018 8:48:00 PM
Thank you. I truly thought it was rather awful.
Date: 12/24/2018 5:11:00 PM
Great dark humor in this one.Wish your second line had not slid into a line three. I kind of took off for that kind of thing! This was GREAT. Congrats in my contest.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/24/2018 8:48:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I did know it was probably too morbid.
Date: 12/19/2018 11:39:00 AM
Ooh, he shouldn't have said a word. Good one.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/19/2018 1:56:00 PM
I know right?
Date: 12/19/2018 10:31:00 AM
Well, I thought it was hilarious!! ;D
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/19/2018 1:56:00 PM
People get so crazy about bragging what they are leaving and their plans post-death. I thought this brought it out.
Date: 12/18/2018 10:54:00 PM
Gladly everything was in farewell, Birth to death- bell and departing knell // beautiful couplet
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/19/2018 8:12:00 AM
I was trying for hilarious, so I do hope you laughed.

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