Christ Paid It All Premiere Contest Winner

It’s sweet, so sweet, our God’s embrace.
The gladdened news - Christ’s costly grace.
The saddened haze, when all seemed lost,
when leaves fell off the tree, when frost
would splinter hands and feet, deface.

Of atmosphere - our outer space,
the depths he held - our inner place.
Christ paid it all - to sin’s exhaust.
It’s sweet, so sweet.

He wore our leaves, the fig’s disgrace.
He shared our loss of par’dise-ace.
The death of Christ, was worth the cost;
He rose - the barrier was crossed.
The salvation of human race -
it’s sweet, so sweet!

4/22/2022
Contest: Your Favorite Theme (Rondeau)
Sponsor: Regina McIntosh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 5/13/2022 9:31:00 AM
Amen Kim! Beautiful rondeau of faith. God's forgiveness is sweet indeed. Congratulations on your trophy win! Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2022 8:26:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! Blessings ~
Date: 5/13/2022 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "CHRIST PAID IT ALL" and He did. A lovely write. Have a blessed day............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2022 9:18:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 5/13/2022 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved first place
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2022 9:07:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Terry!
Date: 5/13/2022 6:48:00 AM
Hearty Congratulations on your prime place in the contest ! A lovely poem extolling God's love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2022 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa! :)
Date: 5/13/2022 3:32:00 AM
Indeed! Christ paid it all! Congrats. Thanks so much for sharing this truth, that's faith-edifying. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2022 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, Beata! God bless you!
Date: 5/12/2022 6:52:00 PM
Surely, he paid it all. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2022 7:45:00 PM
Amen!
Date: 5/12/2022 4:01:00 PM
Sweetly done, Kim, my compliments truly my friend, Aloha~William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2022 7:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, William!
Date: 5/12/2022 12:07:00 PM
This is amazing. I just love it. Congrats on first place. Love and prayers and God bless you always, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2022 1:28:00 PM
So excited to be at the top of your list! Thank you, Gina! <3 God bless you too!
Date: 4/29/2022 6:15:00 AM
He sure did "He shared our loss of par’dise-ace"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2022 8:52:00 PM
Yes, he did, sweet friend!
Date: 4/25/2022 1:29:00 AM
A hymn like share, so serene and enlightening. Amen!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2022 8:52:00 PM
Thank you, Silpika!
Date: 4/22/2022 8:52:00 PM
Wow, profound and excellent poetry, the message not lost.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2022 8:51:00 PM
Thank you, Harry!
Date: 4/22/2022 4:11:00 PM
This one is sure to be a winner. Excellent writing AND theme
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2022 6:30:00 PM
Thank you! We will see :)
Date: 4/22/2022 1:21:00 PM
Great pen Kim, really uplifting inspiring piece. Blessings, Gordon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2022 1:40:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon!
Date: 4/22/2022 11:27:00 AM
Christ picked up the tab, not the debt! Aloha!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2022 11:31:00 AM
He didn’t create us to abandon us. He is a good God. God bless you, Rico!
Date: 4/22/2022 10:38:00 AM
He certainly did kim, we are forever in his debt. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2022 11:16:00 AM
Amen! :)
Date: 4/22/2022 8:59:00 AM
I cannot find the right words to say that this poem exceeds all expectations. Wonderful. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2022 9:20:00 AM
Wow! Thanks so much, my friend! :)
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