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chords whisper-TSF

Two Seven Four Poetry
Contest  //Sponsored by: Charles Messina
( 2nd Place )

Written: August 23, 2025

strings hum
fingers drum
notes soar
echo roar
heart beats
soul meets
night sings

wood sings
tone rings
air bends
sound sends
fire glows
warm flows
life swings

chords leap
dreams seep
eyes close
spirit knows
hands play
tunes stay
time drifts

music flies
stars rise
strings dance
hearts glance
joy swells
song tells
world wakes

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Charles Messina Date: 9/14/2025 4:15:00 AM Very nicely done, Rowena. The last words of the third and fourth stanzas didn't rhyme for if they did you would have placed higher...Oops sorry! Anyway, thanks for entering my contest and Congratulations on your winning placement! Charlie :) Login to Reply Rowena Velasco Date: 9/14/2025 4:19:00 AM Thank you so much, Charlie! I truly appreciate your thoughtful feedback and your kind words. It was an honor to join your contest, and I’m grateful for the placement. Looking forward to joining more of your challenges!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh Date: 8/24/2025 8:55:00 PM Superb Enjoyed reading the poem Login to Reply Rowena Velasco Date: 8/25/2025 2:20:00 AM Thank you so much! I’m really glad you enjoyed it.

Paige Hind Date: 8/24/2025 8:20:00 PM Very deep and rhyme flow, perfect - :) Login to Reply Rowena Velasco Date: 8/25/2025 2:19:00 AM Thanks so much! Really glad you felt the depth and flow.

Bill Baker Date: 8/24/2025 6:49:00 PM I like the rhythm to your footles, Rowena. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill Login to Reply Rowena Velasco Date: 8/25/2025 2:18:00 AM Thanks a lot, Bill! Glad you enjoyed the rhythm.

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/23/2025 5:11:00 PM excellent footles! fabulous contest entry, have a pleasant evening, Sara Login to Reply Rowena Velasco Date: 8/25/2025 2:17:00 AM Thank you so much, Sara! I truly appreciate your kind words. Wishing you a beautiful and peaceful evening as well .

I Am Anaya Date: 8/23/2025 1:45:00 PM Beautiful footles Rowena my favorite is "chords leap dreams seep" August blessings Login to Reply Rowena Velasco Date: 8/25/2025 2:15:00 AM Thank you so much for your kind words Wishing you many August blessings as well.