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Chopped Ii - Moth-Winged Minuet

Moth-winged Minuet Closing my eyes I flew from lonely chair through open window in mesmerized anticipation. Drawn toward the glowing warmth of the porch light. Flames torched my heart as another circled. The crickets kept time as we danced a moth-winged minuet of transparent melancholy. submitted to Craig Cornish – Chopped II – Poetry Contest 11/8/2014

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Date: 11/21/2014 5:51:00 PM
Stunning images of wonderment and strangely, tranquility...loved it CC Many congrats
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John Lawless
Date: 11/21/2014 6:09:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Mark, always good to hear from you.
Date: 11/19/2014 2:51:00 PM
Beautifully flowing poem. Congratulations on your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/19/2014 5:54:00 PM
Thank you Brenda
Date: 11/18/2014 10:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win, John! Yours was one of my favorites...hugs, Rhonda
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John Lawless
Date: 11/19/2014 5:54:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda for following up with congrats. Always appreciated.
Date: 11/18/2014 11:57:00 AM
short but perfectly formed! many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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John Lawless
Date: 11/19/2014 5:53:00 PM
Thanks Jan for your continued support.
Date: 11/17/2014 10:29:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful entry receiving top honors John!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/19/2014 5:51:00 PM
Thanks Connie glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/17/2014 8:22:00 PM
Wow, John this is magnificent. Congratulations on your huge win with this gem.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/19/2014 5:50:00 PM
Thank yuo Maurice for your high praise
Date: 11/17/2014 7:49:00 PM
Big congrats John on this unique well written gem...absolutely love the last sentence
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John Lawless
Date: 11/19/2014 5:48:00 PM
Thank you David, for your comment and support.
Date: 11/16/2014 8:52:00 PM
Wonderful! I love the personification and unique take on the contest, John...love and blessings, Rhonda
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John Lawless
Date: 11/17/2014 6:46:00 AM
Thanks for checking in Rhonda. Always nice to hear from new (to me) "soupers"'

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