Choose to live new song version

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Choose to live

When darkness falls upon you,
and, you can't see the light
Look to the maker of the stars,
to show the way

Sometimes the pain of heart is,
too much to bear....
Life can be beautiful...
despite the pain.

Chorus

Choose to live...
even when it seems
the whole world's against you
Choose to live...
forget about the pain 
they've caused you
Choose to live...
Remember your life's
a gift from God,
and you don't have the right 
to take it!


You may live in a mansion,
or a... cardboard shack
Life can be beautiful
either way

Affliction may bring you sorrow,
but... that's o.k
Look to tomorrow's sun to
shine a better day

Chorus

Choose to live...
even when it seems
the whole world's against you
Choose to live...
forget about the pain 
they've caused you
Choose to live...
Remember your life's
a gift from God...
and you don't have the right 
to take it!


Bridge
Everyone is beautiful,
in their own way...
look inside yourself
to find YOUR special gift!


Repeat chorus and fade

John Derek Hamilton
December 05,2021

Revised July 28 with music and vocals
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 7/30/2025 3:26:00 PM
An important message to value what God has created ... especially our lives. Thanks for sharing the message with the world through your Lyrics and song, John. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/30/2025 5:15:00 PM
Thanks Bill I really appreciate your support!
Date: 7/30/2025 6:39:00 AM
Maria just posted it here John. I put up a song yesterday as well
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/30/2025 9:40:00 AM
Ok will check it out.
Date: 7/29/2025 1:23:00 PM
Such an uplifting and important message John. Suicide and self harm are endemic in Satan's world. Supporting those suffering is so important. Prayer can help too. Check out Maria's latest on her YouTube channel
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/29/2025 6:31:00 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PCfkMrpLtJg
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/29/2025 6:06:00 PM
Thanks Tom it's true more and more people end their lives even ones who seem to have it all. Sad commentary on how they view their lives, not as a gift rather something else. How to find Maria's you tube?
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