Choiceless Choice

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Choosing change, by softening attention Attempting not, to predict direction Flowing like the breeze, with nonchalant ease Heart flicker-free, at moment of release Thought rested awareness, in cessation Ego dormant; we flow as a bliss mist Magnetic currents, within form persist Spacial heart open, invites divine bliss Joy unending, elixirous caress Vibrant emptiness, ceasing to resist Oh hermit! Assign our is-ness no name What is, is our presence, pure and unstained 26-March-2021

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Judy Ball

Date: 3/26/2021 7:12:00 AM

Hmmmm I think what the poet is trying to say here is she supports aggressive passivism. I don't want to hurt anyone's feelings here but I've read a few of your poems and I think you would get more reviews if your poems were easier to understand. Hope I haven't insulted you. Just trying to be helpful. God Bless my friend. JB

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/26/2021 7:42:00 AM

Thank you Judy. Ultimately, we all write for ourselves, on what we feel within, more so related to spirituality. I concede that delineation through words is a distorted shadow reflected on rippled waters, on a cloudy night. Yet, there is a moon! :)