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Chocolate Fountain

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Chocolate Fountain

Chocolate Fountain Abuse- for the lover 

How easily I forget I'm allergic to chocolate
I want to dip the exquisite kosher in a Spanish brandy
Sweet, sweet, cavity tarnish boxes of chocolate

At a store window; a dried up chocolate fantasy goblet
A taste of spoiled milk, nothing dandy with this candy
How easily I forgot I was allergic to chocolate

Snickers Bar, melting under the spotlight for-profit
Not edible, waging unassertive words like a pansy
Sweet, sweet, cavity tarnish boxes of chocolate

Chocolate pop, a candy bar coming out of the closet
There was not much bandy, about this candy
It's easy to forgot I'm allergic to chocolate

Stubby nuts, stomachache, bucket of vomit
Butterflies, flipping when I hear a faucet of cocoa candy
Sweet, sweet, cavity tarnish boxes of chocolate

Enrobed with small nuts, it dwells under the pocket
Caramel and peanuts American walnut vigilante
How easily I forgot I was allergic to chocolate
Sweet, sweet, cavity tarnish boxes of chocolate


Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 10/5/2016 1:18:00 PM
A very cool and ultra-creative poem, Skat A. I loved it, literally and gastronomically. Good food for thought. Excellent wit and self-deprecation. You have such an imaginative mind. I think I know what a villanelle poem should look like, probably have to read a couple more though. Love your fine poetic tapestry. Ty for sharing. Much love to you and yours.
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Date: 8/24/2016 9:41:00 AM
I really like this poem -- perhaps because I read it near lunchtime! My wife was a professional pastry chef for 15 years, and my first job as a boy was operating a soda fountain. Wonderful "tasty" imagery.
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Date: 1/16/2016 8:32:00 PM
You do know that i am now hungry again. Loved this one. I know i should have stayed away when i did read the title. That chocolate fountain becomes a mountain in my imagination. No, i have to go and eat now, self control is something i am just no good at. Excellent once again Skat. A definite seven. Your Friend....Vladislav.
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Date: 1/7/2016 11:21:00 PM
Wow, Skat! The sweetness of this poem attracted me, now I have a sweet tooth for more. I love this vilanelle. Beautifully written.
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Date: 12/30/2015 6:46:00 PM
Love your Chocolate Fountain, SKAT. I feel like this after eating Christmas candy. Stomachache royale. I read it over twice. It makes me feel good.
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Date: 10/15/2015 7:48:00 AM
This is so good SKAT, I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Date: 9/21/2015 12:12:00 PM
Skat, beautifully penned and thanks for visiting my poetry. ..
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Date: 7/1/2015 9:42:00 AM
Awesome poem I really liked it.
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:56:00 PM
SKAT, I just just stopped by to say congrats on your awesome win:Alexis
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:11:00 PM
Congrats on your great win, SKAT! hugs!
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Date: 6/24/2015 3:17:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Skat...
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Date: 6/24/2015 11:37:00 AM
Big congrats SKAT...nicely done!
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:22:00 AM
Yay for chocolate! I really like this, congrats!
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on this chocolaty villanelle, Skat!! And a podium finish, too!:) // paul
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Date: 6/24/2015 12:48:00 AM
Yup high on the list :)
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Date: 6/23/2015 9:10:00 PM
Skat, so sad if you are truly allergic to chocolate. You really seem to love it!! Great seeing your name high on this list. Congrats.
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your calorific win, Skat. Viv x
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:39:00 PM
Yummy one! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:37:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win! I love me some chocolate delights and this one just satisfies my sweet tooth!
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:21:00 PM
Congrad's & stay away from the chocolate! LOL Light & Love
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Date: 6/23/2015 5:40:00 PM
many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/23/2015 5:13:00 PM
Wonderful write, Skat. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve * @-)--< 7
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Date: 6/23/2015 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved second. I think that you have a sweet tooth and love indulging in a box of chocolates. The senses are aroused and the temptation is too much as you long to savor each sinful morsel. Emile. #7
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Date: 6/23/2015 12:14:00 PM
congrats Skat on your win with this super poem hugs
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Date: 6/24/2015 1:34:00 AM
:) Thanxs
Date: 6/12/2015 1:08:00 PM
very nice It sounds like you're a dog with a hankering for chocolate but can't indulge. I would consider that hell. maybe put in more hints of actual dog traits?
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