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Chloe

eyes of seafoam green
feral mermaid heart

holding out for true love
her balanced counterpart



AP: 1st place 2020

Submitted on  September 28, 2020 for contest COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (18) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  Honorable Mention
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Krutsinger Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win.
Gauthier Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 1:21 PM
thanks, much appreciated, Caren ~
Mcintosh Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 1:15 PM
lovely writing :) I love it. God bless you
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 6:16 PM
Thanks, Regina. Much appreciated ~
Horsman Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 9:25 PM
I've got green eyes, Line, but they sure aren't as beautiful as your poem.
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 6:59 AM
I'm sure you're just being modest, Harry ~
Wolf Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 7:55 PM
Here's an instance where it's good to hold-out! Lovely penned, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 8:20 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon ~
La France Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 9:27 AM
Line, lovely lines _Constance
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Thanks, Constance. Much appreciated~
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 5:34 AM
gorgeous image gorgeous picture, love it Line:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Thanks, Jan ~
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