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Chimera

With four arms and four legs, a face that's disfigured and small, he crouches compliant and strokes the electrodes. The men in white lab coats are smiling. They treat him just like an amoeba, poking and prodding his body with needles and probes. A subject for scrutiny under a microscope, no humanity fueling his bones, he's bizarre. Bioethicists say: 'He's a man with a soul!' but what price a soul if you're born in a jar?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/6/2012 11:16:00 PM
wow, this is really cool. And something to think about!! hey, I just now noticed that all our stuff is available for people to easily view. how awesome is that??? Now I can go to your last page and just work my way thru your poetry starting with first thing you ever posted.
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Date: 12/12/2008 2:29:00 PM
this is great ! :) thanks for the comment on my poem and alexz is a character :). we hang out alot and she's amazing no matter how many agruments we get into lol. hope your well ~Love Sammy~
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Date: 12/12/2008 12:55:00 PM
Who determines if they have a soul. I used to joke about the genetics but it's all coming true. Like I told my wife, 20 years from now you'll be able to pick your baby's nose. She looked over and said "You're sick." Yeah and I enjoy every minute. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 12/12/2008 12:35:00 PM
Wow! Much to ponder in this poem. Sad creatures have to bear this. Thank you for sharing this thought provoking poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen
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Date: 12/11/2008 1:11:00 PM
Hey to you, Keith! I think you can tackle and conquer anything that comes your way:) This is definitely a mind probe. Sad though..I wonder how they might detect his soul imprisoned in a jar? Was the microscope, in reality, a high tech telescope where they might reach out to the heavens? The flow and imagery in this piece, is true to the "Bickerstaffe" form...it's exceptional!:) God bless you and yours..wishing you the best..Love, Mikki
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Date: 12/11/2008 9:57:00 AM
Wow...the makings of a thriller or science fiction horror move! But sad and chilling too. Interesting subject for a poem, but you did it justice! (Are you speaking of those things you can buy in the store, that grow grass out of their skulls....funny little gifts that come out at Christmas time!!~ Carrie
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