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Chilled Steps

Steps creaking in silence on the staircase to a hallway that is long and darkened. Voice echoes faintly from an open door as the sounds grow closer, the chill speaks clear. Halloween fun contest written by Michael J Falotico

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/28/2011 11:16:00 AM
So subtle, the unnerving shadows and echoes make one think twice about going there. Nice news that you are a winner .
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Date: 10/6/2011 5:17:00 PM
Congrats in tour win, Mike. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 10/3/2011 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Halloween Fun" contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2011 2:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Michael! Kim
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Date: 10/2/2011 12:55:00 AM
Spooooky! Well done. congratulations on your win. Nice to see some new thoughts about this topic. Lee
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Date: 10/1/2011 9:19:00 PM
Delicious fear...! congrats on your win...you always entertain. BG
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations. There has always been something scary about squeaky stairs. Congratulations on your win. Joyce
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:26:00 PM
Hair-raising write...congrats..........George
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Date: 9/28/2011 3:41:00 PM
Well now you got me wondering what makes those creaks... very timely and loved the spookiness you put in here, Michael :) btw, echoes I think would work here... enjoyed this one, Michael-- spooky hugs :D
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Date: 9/24/2011 2:04:00 AM
yeah, spooky and cold... You showed how rigid the loneliness is.. greatly done!
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:06:00 PM
ooohhhh spppooookkkyyy Michael.. luv.. come with me down this corridor of darkness please.. great lines of poetic art for Halloween Fun... good luck my W.K. and YEAH..the GMEN did it.. won..sloppy but a win..oh am ecstatic.. your Jersey Girl in rah rah mode.. always with luv..xoxo
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