Chill Evening

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frosty stars are out pink moon wanders into night with its fragrancies summer's chasing fall in its ripe, lonely old age they'll dance at the ball both dressed up in hues blending the old with the new wind whistles weather mars watches redly far from a pink robin's tune purple skies fade soon

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/22/2023 1:19:00 PM

I enjoyed this one. Love your write/pretty picture. Enjoy your day writing away..............

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/22/2023 10:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paula. Have a wonderful week. :)

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 3:04:00 AM

As always vivid imagery in your words expressed through a form you do with excellence... love them all, especially the last one..

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/15/2023 12:37:00 PM

Your words gladden my heart. Thank you, Silent One.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/13/2023 4:09:00 PM

I liked this poem. It made me feel presrnt in a peaceful place.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/13/2023 4:37:00 PM

That is very nice to know, Hilda. Thank you so much. :)

Tom Woody

Date: 10/12/2023 1:33:00 PM

Love it. My fave line is the one about the pink moon. And I like how you snuck Mars in there too

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/12/2023 9:11:00 PM

Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this, Tom. I'm so delighted!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/12/2023 6:14:00 AM

Enjoyed the hues you convey Evelyn. Splendid write.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/12/2023 12:49:00 PM

Thank you very much, Vijay.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/12/2023 3:53:00 AM

Your way with painting imagery is truly so beautiful to the eyes! It makes my heart beam! So gorgeous! And very well written haiku chain this is. I especially love that opening and also your use of colors, subtle yet so artistic! The ending is stunning too! Pleasure reading your work always

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/12/2023 12:49:00 PM

Thank you so much for your joy inspiring remarks, Ink. I am so delighted that you enjoyed this poem. I hope your day is wonderful.