Children's Laughter

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Tri-Con
Created by Connie Marcum Wong consisting of at least 4 three line stanzas. Each line has no set meter or syllable count. The last word in each stanza must rhyme with the following Stanza and then you need to change your rhyming word again in the third stanza and so on.

The sound of children’s laughter is refreshing to my ears, and brings a smile to my day. Even more than summer’s heat I love the cacophony of youth's innocence at play. The scamper of tiny feet fuels my enthusiasm, for the frolics of summer. It begins right after spring, for much like nature, children dance to another drummer. As their vigor pumps my heart I almost feel young again, spry, without an ache or care. Summer’s the season for fun, suntans, and relaxation, to me, it’s beyond compare. (Tri-Con) 06/24/2020 Summer Love Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/7/2020 8:33:00 AM

Wow! I love how beautifully you've portrayed the innocence of childhood in summer. Also, I wasn't aware of this poetry form but it looks interesting. Thanks for sharing this. Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2020 8:49:00 AM

Thanks Aditi, I appreciate all your comments and support my friend, Emile.

John Watt

Date: 7/5/2020 1:56:00 PM

Emile, it really is wonderful to see how earnestly you promote the forms created by PS poets, and with your very special style and poetic vision. This is another lovely observation of life, that of living vicariously through the energy and enthusiasm of children at play. This really lifted my spirits today. Thank you, and congrats for your win, my friend ~ John

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/5/2020 4:53:00 PM

Thank you John, your words honor me my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/5/2020 9:15:00 AM

How lovely this is Emile! I feel so honored when your write in one of my poetry forms. This poem gleams with the summer sun! I am Faving it! Congratulations on your podium win Emile! Blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/7/2020 8:34:00 AM

Thanks for creating such an interesting poetry form Connie. Glad I got to know about it through Emile's muse! :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/5/2020 4:57:00 PM

Thanks Connie,I love all your creative forms, they've spawned some beautiful poems, you should feel proud! I know I'm proud of you, stay safe my friend, Emile.

John Watt
Date: 7/5/2020 1:58:00 PM

Connie, I agree wholeheartedly with you at how lovely this poem is, and let me add that your poetry form is also lovely and worthy of being thus highlighted. Thank you!

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/4/2020 4:03:00 PM

Congrats on your win!;)

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/4/2020 7:05:00 PM

Thanks Brenda, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.