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Childlike Wisdom - Waltz Wave

Out of the mouths of babes come words of logic and guileless innocence. Simplicity of thought that takes us by surprise causing us to long for childlike faith.
10/16/15 Entered into SKAT's Best October Poem contest 8th place

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Date: 11/24/2015 10:17:00 AM
You are very correct about children's wisdom, Kim. They are also honest...with innocence and no hidden agendas! Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations Kim
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 5:58:00 PM
Thank you, Nayda!
Date: 11/21/2015 2:42:00 AM
That is just the truth, child innocence, congrats Kim...hugs
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 5:57:00 PM
Thank you, Kayod5!
Date: 11/20/2015 11:33:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb poetry Kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 5:56:00 PM
Thank you, Upma!
Date: 11/20/2015 10:57:00 PM
Kim, Congratulations on your wonderful OCTOBER win. I'm inviting you in hopes you enjoy my blog "I am the Pen" wrapping up October and its late winners :( Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 5:56:00 PM
Thank you for my placement in your contest, SKAT! I appreciate it!
Date: 11/2/2015 10:48:00 AM
Your poem flows through time like the currents of life, with a realistic crispness. Thanks. Emile.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/10/2015 4:43:00 PM
Thank you, Emile! Even your comments are poetic!
Date: 10/31/2015 1:45:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this poem, Kim. I must try the waltz wave style again. Julia, :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/10/2015 4:42:00 PM
Thank you, Julia!
Date: 10/30/2015 7:41:00 PM
Dear Kim Refreshing and truthful my friend, love the thoughts that went into this work, and thanks for the comment on my poetry as well, have a great Halloween, cheri
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:20:00 PM
Thank you, Cherl!
Date: 10/30/2015 1:46:00 AM
Delightful word dancing that reminds us of the beauty of childhood's innocence and splendor! Wonderfully done, dear Kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Demetrios!
Date: 10/29/2015 5:21:00 PM
Easy to read while it conveys good descriptiveness. Thanks for sharing.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:17:00 PM
Thank you for your comment, Robert! I appreciate it.
Date: 10/29/2015 4:19:00 PM
wise words Kim I enjoyed your wonderful waltz:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Appreciate it.
Date: 10/29/2015 4:00:00 PM
I like this very much,Katherine
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:15:00 PM
Thank you, Katherine! I'm so glad you like it.
Date: 10/29/2015 3:58:00 PM
wonderful that you are doing waltz form again. I need to try it again too. Nice one.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:14:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I like this form.

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