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Luke 18:17 - Verily I say unto you, Whosoever shall not receive the kingdom of God as a little child shall in no wise enter therein. When I was around five For Christmas, I received one of those Easy Bake Ovens that I’d hoped for There was a problem with this gift, though Being an only child left me with a challenge Finding someone older to read me the directions Guidelines to the recipes for those delicious cakes Loretta was my aunt and I loved playing with her She would sit for hours listening to my childish visions Whispering and playing, pretending, faithfully Enjoying the moments in a way that only those Who are childlike and filled with faith in God Can really enjoy the moments, with simplicity That sings to the heart with gentle fulfillment “Ok,” I bossed in my little girl wisdom… “come on, Loretta… “ and I pulled her toward my room Where the Easy Bake oven waited for us. Taking out the boxed cake mix in my favorite flavor Chocolate! – I handed her the empty box As I started to pour the mix into a small bowl. “You read me the directions and I’ll mix the cake” She grinned at me, laughed through her smile And shrugged, “I can’t read” Now I was no fool! I knew, from all my worldliness, That all adults could read – and Loretta was definitely an adult “You’re lying,” I accused her and knew my voice was getting louder As she continued to deny her ability to read and I, despite her denials, Told her I knew she was able to do the very things she denied. Finally, certain that she was lying, I went out to the living room Where all the adults were gathered around a tv screen “Loretta can read,” I told them, and asked, “Can’t she?” To my surprise, my grandpa, the most trusted adult of them all, told me, “No, she can’t” Struggling to understand, I dropped my head and went back to my room Loretta sat there waiting, smiling and laughing at my astonishment “I told you so,” she spoke and that is when I first knew Loretta was different – a child in an adult body. Why? What could it mean? Someone had to explain. It would be years before I realized that my aunt, who I loved And couldn’t wait to play with when we visited my grandparents, Had been struck with a illness when she was a young child And that affliction had left her without her full mental capacity Her limbs were left unparalyzed, but her mind had been struck With paralysis from those moments so long before I was born And it took me some time to comprehend the nature of her heart Which lived in a state of childlike faith that encouraged me to believe That being a child, as an adult, is something of a gift from God’s hand Today, years after Loretta’s death, I have no doubt that she has entered into the kingdom of God – with a heart untainted by this world and it’s curses!

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Date: 1/10/2021 6:33:00 AM
I'm sure she can read now. Terrible to be struck with such an illness. ~~
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Date: 1/9/2021 8:11:00 AM
This one brought a chill and tears to my eyes. I think too about my granddaughters’ stepsister, her mind lost to shaken baby syndrome. God teaches us through the loss of innocence our little minds find, not always making sense. Even as adults, we ponder and struggle to understand a lifetime spent in a childlike state. Fave for me. God bless.
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Date: 1/9/2021 7:40:00 AM
Wow, such a moving poem. I especially liked your summation about this being a gift from God.
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Date: 1/9/2021 6:25:00 AM
Deeply touching!
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