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Childhood Versus Adulthood

Childhood* Precocious, curious Playing, exploring, growing exuberance, fantasy; insurance, legacy Praying, mentoring, laboring Cautious, anxious Adulthood
*Ecclesiastes 11:10 Therefore remove sorrow from thy heart, and put away evil from thy flesh: for childhood and youth are vanity. June 15, 2019 2nd place, "Sparkling Diamonds" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May; judged on 6/25/2019.

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Date: 6/25/2019 8:07:00 PM
Nicely penned Beata..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 6/25/2019 6:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 6/18/2019 8:17:00 AM
A winner in my book!
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Date: 6/16/2019 3:58:00 PM
I think this is a great set of contrasting adjectives and verbs, Beata. The first three lines set the scene for childhood really well. Best wishes Wendy
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