Childhood Scents

In laundered lilac linen I lounged half awake
What would this sumptuous Saturday share
Would gregarious grandmother graciously bake
Although the wicked waft of her cakes was hard to compare
I was silently salivating for her chicken fricassee fare

The farm freshest fricassee demanded a certain hen
accompanied by green gardens greatest of variety vegetable
sauteed snips of mint, garlic, and onion, Amen
Wafted walnut savory sauce anticipating the set table
Secret sprinkle cayenne pepper activating heat is enabled

When plated these lusciously lubricated white slices
Of soft succulent hen atop fresh potato mash 
Stunningly Swimming alongside  fresh vegetable dices
When your tongue tip tastes there's an instant flash
Of cherished childhood flavored food, a true saliva splash
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 5:14 PM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry. I was glad to place it in the winners' list. Congrats on being there. Thank you for participating. Sara
Steele Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:56 PM
Congrats, Donna. Well done.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 8:34 PM
Totally delightful, Donna. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:31 PM
what yummy scents they were!! I hope you still get to smell them today! Congrats for your win, Donna
Allison Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Dropping back to say congrats on your win: Donna-) hugs jan xx
Gupta Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 12:36 PM
Beautiful rhyme and wonderful alliteration ... Congratulations on your nice win ...
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 10:07 PM
Congratulations on your win, Donna! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
Roberts Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 11:21 PM
You too Eve
Gentry Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Congratulations on your win with this nostalgic poem!
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Mmm what wonderful rhyme and alliteration :-) hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 9:01 AM
I was lucky you have a grandmother that was such a good cook, thanks Jan
One Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Great alliteration Donna, this is a great poem...
Roberts Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Muchas Gracious, S.O.
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