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Childhood Scents

In laundered lilac linen I lounged half awake What would this sumptuous Saturday share Would gregarious grandmother graciously bake Although the wicked waft of her cakes was hard to compare I was silently salivating for her chicken fricassee fare The farm freshest fricassee demanded a certain hen accompanied by green gardens greatest of variety vegetable sauteed snips of mint, garlic, and onion, Amen Wafted walnut savory sauce anticipating the set table Secret sprinkle cayenne pepper activating heat is enabled When plated these lusciously lubricated white slices Of soft succulent hen atop fresh potato mash Stunningly Swimming alongside fresh vegetable dices When your tongue tip tastes there's an instant flash Of cherished childhood flavored food, a true saliva splash

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Date: 4/2/2018 5:14:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry. I was glad to place it in the winners' list. Congrats on being there. Thank you for participating. Sara
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:56:00 PM
Congrats, Donna. Well done.
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Date: 3/30/2018 8:34:00 PM
Totally delightful, Donna. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 3/30/2018 7:31:00 PM
what yummy scents they were!! I hope you still get to smell them today! Congrats for your win, Donna
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Date: 3/30/2018 12:51:00 PM
Dropping back to say congrats on your win: Donna-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/30/2018 12:36:00 PM
Beautiful rhyme and wonderful alliteration ... Congratulations on your nice win ...
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Date: 3/29/2018 10:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Donna! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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Donna Roberts
Date: 3/29/2018 11:21:00 PM
You too Eve
Date: 3/29/2018 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this nostalgic poem!
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Date: 3/1/2018 8:04:00 AM
Mmm what wonderful rhyme and alliteration :-) hugs Jan xx
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Donna Roberts
Date: 3/1/2018 9:01:00 AM
I was lucky you have a grandmother that was such a good cook, thanks Jan
Date: 2/28/2018 3:17:00 PM
Great alliteration Donna, this is a great poem...
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Donna Roberts
Date: 2/28/2018 3:31:00 PM
Muchas Gracious, S.O.

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