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Childhood Nostalgia

Childhood Nostalgia Little kid at heart Still wishes on dusk's first star Rides on cloud ships Recalls games of innocence Sandcastles and tree houses. 8-30-22 Contest Childhood Nostalgia Sponsor: JCB Brul

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/21/2022 1:48:00 PM

lovely ~

Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/22/2022 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Line for sharing in these childhood nostalgic moments! Merry Christmas.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2022 11:24:00 AM

Ahh!!, Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page to read "Consequences" which I have now finished if you care to drop by and read the finished work. Sara

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/12/2022 10:12:00 AM

Greetings Sara! I am so grateful for the time you took to read and comment. Glad you enjoyed this trip into childhood magic! Will take a look at Consequences. Hope you are well. Sending you blessings.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/6/2022 4:48:00 PM

Oh, this is truth <3 How sweet and wonderful your precious poem is! We are all children in disguise, and you penned this wonderfully well! :) <3

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/7/2022 11:27:00 AM

Hi BJ! Oh, thank you so much for your beautiful feedback - a blessing! I like "we are all children in disguise!" What a wonderful and delightful message. It is truly a gift to let that child play as much as possible - one heart touching another heart! Sending your inner child blessings from my inner child! Hugs!

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/6/2022 11:27:00 AM

Oh yes, My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, you've captured childhood nostalgia with your timeless eloquence and poetic elegance to stir my heart's imagination with sweet reminiscence. Indeed, I still love all those things in your heartwarming poem, we're both still little kids at heart, my inspiring poetry sis! When I'm out walking, I still think; "I can climb that tree or jump that fence if I (really) wanted too" lol!! I hope my mind never fully grows up haha! I adore your wonderful tanka, my dearest Sam, and the great memories they roused.. such is the potent beauty of your poem. Warmest wishes for a win and warmest wishes sent on a "cloud ship" (love that) for you.. ~Susan

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/6/2022 11:07:00 PM

My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, what a joy it is to have a poetry sis to ride on cloud ships, build tree houses, climb trees, jump fences - wish on stars with as little kids at heart jumping for joy! I have decided I'm not growing up until I'm at least 95 then I want high-heeled tennies and drive my golf cart in the bicycle lane with the two us laughing down the lane! Thank you for your eloquent and elegant words of congratulations - words to put in a treasure box like seashells, flat stones and pressed rose petals. I don't think either one of us will ever outgrow our little kid at heart dear poetry sis! Sending you blessings of the heart on the first evening star!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/2/2022 3:12:00 AM

Love this Sam you have hit a homerun with this wonderful Tanka of yours. It is great being a child and not knowing too much of the world and enjoying all you have mentioned. A favorite. God bless you my friend.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/7/2022 11:24:00 AM

Hi Michael! I am so very honored by your fav! That is indeed a special gift! Thank you for the blessing of your message. Being able to find the joy of childhood in life is truly something that continues to feed our inner child and continuously reminds us to look for joy! Sending blessings on wings of joy my friend!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/1/2022 4:12:00 PM

Hello Sam: Our inner child is always with us to keep the joy. Lovely poem. SuZ

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/7/2022 11:20:00 AM

Hi SuZ! Thank you for your delightful feedback! I so agree! It was so wonderful to see so many inner children at play in this contest! It was indeed a jou-filled contest! Sending you blessings!

Jim Slaughter

Date: 9/1/2022 10:55:00 AM

And writing helps us hang on to those things, don't they, Sam? BOL in the contest.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/2/2022 9:19:00 AM

Indeed it does Jim! Writing for this contest I got to revel in so many wonderful memories again - and a few growing pains! It makes me appreciate those childhood days even more! And, this contest has brought out so many wonderful memories for so many poets! It is a delight to share in their joy and find we share so many of the same experiences! All the best! Blessings!

Len Gasun

Date: 9/1/2022 7:00:00 AM

I can relate my dear friend Sam. So wonderful and so precious memories to cherish forever. Congratulations on your first place win and this stellar tanka my dear friend! Thanks a lot for sharing! God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/7/2022 11:17:00 AM

Hi Len! I am so grateful for your lovely feedback and so glad it resurrected happy childhood memories for you! I think this was such a fun contest theme. There were so many wonderful tankas bringing back so many incredible memories it was an honor to be on the winners list! Sending you many blessings dear friend! Hugs! :)"

Valsa George

Date: 8/31/2022 10:34:00 PM

Even when we become adults, there is a child hiding within each one of us ! Every time we remember the innocent days of fun and frolic, we wish ardently if we could retrace our steps back into those days! Making tree houses has been our favorite game too ! Your sweet memories have ignited a flood of similar reminiscences in me ! Congratulations on your sweet win, dear Sam

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2022 10:12:00 AM

You are so right when you say there is a child still yearning to play in every adult - to play hide and seek with us - and our memories of the fun times of childhood really do help to refresh and renew our inner child! It is so sad to see grownups ignore that playful spirit in them thinking that life has to be so serious! The theme of this contest has sparked so many different memories in people. I'm so happy that this poem did that for you dear friend! Sending you many playful blessings to brighten each day.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/31/2022 3:26:00 PM

May we all stay a little kid at heart and wish on the dusk's first star. :) Fabulous write Sam. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2022 9:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Linda! I am so appreciative of your congratulations and your beautiful message! It always pains me to see people who have lost their childlike wonder and forget to wish on the first evening star! Sending you blessings found on the evening star!

Ann Peck

Date: 8/31/2022 10:56:00 AM

Those memories so sweet, Sam. I love that you still wish on evening's first star. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2022 11:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Ann. They are indeed sweet like an all day sucker. I guess the little kid in me still can't resist the light of the first star. It is truly a moment of happiness, and stillness, as the day ends. Thank you for noticing! Sending you blessings from that first evening star!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/31/2022 9:10:00 AM

Wonderful memories very nicely written, Sam. Congratulations on your top win.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2022 11:20:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad! It was a real challenge to decide what to highlight as each happy memory of childhood is a treasure! Sending blessings your way my friend! :)"

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/31/2022 6:02:00 AM

Kid-memories are, indeed, great. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2022 11:19:00 AM

Agreed Chris! It was so much fun to take a deep dive into a whole lot of childhood happiness. Wonderful theme for a contest. So many wonderful tankas. It is an honor to be on the winners list! Blessings!

Terry Miller

Date: 8/31/2022 5:48:00 AM

Wonderful Sam, great memories, fantastic Tanka.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2022 11:15:00 AM

Terry, thank you so much! This contest theme was like a joy ride back into some very happy memories! And, as I mentioned to Connie remembering some growing pains too! All the best! Cheers and blessings to you!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/31/2022 2:06:00 AM

I wanted this to go on and on Sam. I can relate perfectly. Being young at heart makes a grandma very popular with the grand kids. I know the Tanka limited this. I hope you have a top winner. I loved it! Blessings xxoo

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2022 11:13:00 AM

And, you are so right about the grand babies!!! We have so much fun hiking, going to the water slides, playing volleyball, teaching them to ski etc., etc., etc.! So many opportunities to do fun things!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2022 11:11:00 AM

Thank you so much Connie! I am so honored by your wonderful message. See this :) your note put on my face? When I thought about writing on childhood nostalgia I started to make a list to include in the tanka. Well...I soon discovered I would have to write several tankas to include everything on my list! Thank you for your congratulations dear friend! This contest gave all of the us the opportunity to wander back into our childhood and rediscover the happy memories residing there - along with some growing pains. Sending blessings and prayers your way!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/31/2022 2:10:00 AM

I see it did win First Place. Congratulations my friend! Xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/30/2022 6:46:00 PM

The way to be…a kid at heart! Nice one, Sam!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2022 11:03:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim! I think being a little kid at heart allows us to continue to be playful and awestruck by the wonders around us remembering through innocent eyes! Blessings dear Kim!

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/30/2022 1:23:00 PM

Childhood memories are the absolute best. Good luck with your entry, Sam.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2022 11:00:00 AM

I so agree Jenna! A foundation of happy memories, and childhood friends, to carry through life's roller coaster ride! Thank you for your best wishes! Blessings.